In cooperation, a group is working towards a common goal whereas, in competition, one individual is fighting with others to gain something. The given statement compares two schools of thoughts, one is inclined towards competition while other is is leaned towards cooperation. Healthy competition and cooperation on arduous issues always helpful for achieving success.
Firstly, healthy competition assists to improve quality of the product. For example, the current market of smartphones experiencing strong competition. Because of this, customers are getting high-quality services and products at lower prices.
In the democratic government, there is need for strong opposition who can argue with the ruling party on various issues in the government and have a debate on them. It helps the government to make good decisions. All the above factors state that healthy competition is always helpful for the common man.
Furthermore, bad competition can lead to disastrous consequences. Such competition is very unpleasant for small players.
For instance, Microsoft is a big software manufacturer. In early 2000, they had a monopoly in internet browsing business. They kept their software prices low to kill small software businesses. Which resulted in every customer was using only Microsoft software. Therefore unhealthy competition is very destructive for weaker players. It hinders the growth of small industries.
Finally, cooperation also helps to solve difficult problems such as world peace, world trade, etc. The world trade organization is a good example of cooperation. It provides equal opportunities for all countries to trade. It creates an unbiased environment for small countries for doing business all over the globe. Hence cooperation is always helped humankind to solve tough problems such as global warming, nuclear proliferation, and world peace.
In conclusion, all the above examples indicate that healthy competition and cooperation is the way to development. It provides equal opportunities to all the sections of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nclined towards competition while other is is leaned towards cooperation. Healthy com...
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... low to kill small software businesses. Which resulted in every customer was using on...
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...mer was using only Microsoft software. Therefore unhealthy competition is very destructi...
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... for doing business all over the globe. Hence cooperation is always helped humankind ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72312703583 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13802358383 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583061889251 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.271215021 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.2083333333 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7916666667 23.4991977007 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0514632872516 0.243740707755 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0132481690371 0.0831039109588 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0195897411286 0.0758088955206 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0243291462296 0.150359130593 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235898319371 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 48.8420337079 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 12.1743820225 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.01 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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