Claim In any field business politics education government those in power should step down after five years Reason The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership Write a response in which you discuss the extent to wh
"If the surest path to success of an enterprise is replaced by a new leader then those in power should step down". Although, his argument is credible up to some extent. The tenure of a leader in a democratic country like India is for five years, which is crucial for the development of a country.counties like, South Korea and India its mandate to change the leader of the educational institution after four and five years so that the development will not remain stagnant. But we should keep in mind " the only source of knowledge is experience". If a leader is not well qualified for his position he should get demoted from his position.
First and foremost, " in the business world, everyone is paid in two coins; cash and experience. Take the experience first, cash will come later". Steve Paul Jobs was an American investor, developer, businessmen, co-founder and CEO of Apple computer. Apple's revolutionary products including iPhone, iPad, and iPod are a major part of this contemporary world. By contrast, during the time when Steve Jobs expelled by the board of directors of the company, many of its products failed and the company had become bankrupt. Apparently, Steve Jobs was fully qualified for his position and regarded as the greatest CEO of the 21st century. Hence, experienced leaders play a crucial role in the process of success and wise enough to take significant decisions with confidence.
However, new leaders are often very motivational and motivation leads to success. In addition, new and young leaders come with new ideas. They are keen on new inventions, which leads them to build a new world. New leaders are uploaded with new technologies and services around the world. These characteristics are beneficial for an enterprise. As "inexperience is the quality, allowing to do impossible".
To sum up, if a leader of an enterprise is fulfilling his responsibility, he should not be replaced by a new leader. But if a leader is no longer qualified for his job, then it is high time to replace the current leader with the qualified one.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If the surest path to success of an enterp...
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Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r then those in power should step down. Although, his argument is credible up to some ex...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 644, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...s the greatest CEO of the 21st century. Hence experienced leaders play a crucial role...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...s;inexperience is the quality, allowing to do impossible'. To sum up, if a lead...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, well, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98567335244 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10681536388 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550143266476 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9974767929 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157533313724 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490245965304 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663596131477 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097299279863 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732445914023 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If the surest path to success of an enterp...
^^
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r then those in power should step down. Although, his argument is credible up to some ex...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 644, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...s the greatest CEO of the 21st century. Hence experienced leaders play a crucial role...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...s;inexperience is the quality, allowing to do impossible'. To sum up, if a lead...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, well, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98567335244 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10681536388 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550143266476 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9974767929 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157533313724 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490245965304 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663596131477 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097299279863 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732445914023 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.