claim: Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted, since it may well be proven false in the future.
Reason: Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate.
The speaker asserts that people should not believe any information that regarded as a fact because a great number of them have proven to be inaccurate. While for both the claim and the reason, the circumstance where they are agreeable should be consider differently for different fields.
In the field of science, it is unjustifiable to blindly think that any fact is untrustworthy especially in nowadays. In the past, it might be true that people should not easily trust information that referred to as a fact since a lot of them was constructed partially based on some religion beliefs. For example, there was a time where the majority of the people thought that the earth was the centre of the universe. but eventually, Copernicus pointed out heliocentric theory and proves that the it is actually the sun the centre of the universe. Nevertheless, in recent society, technologies have become so much advanced and researchers can fly to any place around the world or even into space to conduct a comprehensive investigation or experiment before coming to a conclusion. In other words, what have been established as facts have extensive amount of evidences as their base to support them and they are highly credible. who can deny that
However, negative informations, reports regarding to celebrities should not be trusted easily. micheal jackson, one of the most talented musician in the world, was being assaulted because the change of his skin colour. At that time, a gigantic amount of entertainment news reported that he intentionally changed to white skin because of his discriminations towards black. Nonetheless, later, some unearthed that it was the skin disease that caused the skin colour change. even though after the realization of the truth, his reputation as an admirable singer had recovered, micheal jackson himself still suffered a lot from extremely negative criticisms since there was a significant amount of people who believed the fake news. recently, due to businesses’ ambition in catching public attention, a lot of them tend to create informations that are explosive but inaccurate. Therefore, informations related to entertainment industry that people assume as factual might turns out to be false.
In sum, the speaker overgeneralize the situations in different fields. The most important thing is, no matter for what kinds of information, people should hold a rational and clinical attitude toward them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...ance where they are agreeable should be consider differently for different fields. ...
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Line 11, column 105, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...at any fact is untrustworthy especially in nowadays. In the past, it might be true that peo...
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Line 11, column 419, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...e earth was the centre of the universe. but eventually, Copernicus pointed out heli...
^^^
Line 11, column 494, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...out heliocentric theory and proves that the it is actually the sun the centre of the u...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 930, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Who
...port them and they are highly credible. who can deny that However, n...
^^^
Line 11, column 930, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...port them and they are highly credible. who can deny that However, n...
^^^
Line 11, column 947, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y are highly credible. who can deny that However, negative informations, reports ...
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Line 21, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Micheal
...lebrities should not be trusted easily. micheal jackson, one of the most talented music...
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Line 21, column 473, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...ase that caused the skin colour change. even though after the realization of the tru...
^^^^
Line 21, column 729, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Recently
...t of people who believed the fake news. recently, due to businesses' ambition in ca...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40769230769 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.070274869 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.891892986 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.058823529 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9411764706 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299939924368 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887311838849 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994639522866 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171509097294 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938842059673 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.