A nation should introduce the same study curriculum for every student in school before they enter college
In the argument, it is being stated that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. however, in my opinion, this statement is unjustifible in several aspects.
By requiring all of its students to take the exact same course might be beneficial in terms of fair judgement for student's ability. because every student is learning the same knowledge that are at the same level, whether a student have an outstanding ability about learning certain subject can be clearly shown by taking a test. this will be extremely helpful for a country to nurture specialist in certain area. For example if a student obtained the highest score in a math, then top universities or colleges that are famous for their math education can provide scholarship to this student. In this case, not only the student can receive the best education to strengthen his ability in solving or exploring math problem, but also he might become a well-known mathematician who is capable making illutrious contribution to his country.
however, if all students can only take those courses that are required by the nation, their freedom of exploring their ability in other things such as art and music will be deprvied. In my point of view, students should be allow to take courses they might interested in. if a nation only provide courses of math, English and physicys, then students are coerced to stop pursing things that might be the true passion of their life.
Furthermore, because all students are taking the same courses and learning the same thing, it is possible that some of them will get mentally hurt each time seeing his or her grade being lower than others. this situation might results in a mindset that "if I am good at solving math and physics problems or writing essay, then I am useless". In some severe cases, students might get depressed or might drop out of school and lost their hope in life. Thinking about long term, the unemployment rate in the nation might have a signficant increase and there might be a higher poverty rate because people are less likely to get a decent job and have the ability to make a living without proper education.
In sum, everything is a double-edged swore; thus a nation should make a careful evaluation and a thorough research before making a conclusion about whether unify the courses for all students is good or bad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91747572816 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61532927461 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507281553398 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1034400221 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.066666667 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4666666667 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274513626553 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976904756015 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939252370939 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16723311455 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080050027252 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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