claim: Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted, since it may well be proven false in the future.
Reason: Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate.
In our society, trusting everything could be adverse. I disagree with the claim since not any fact should be mistrusted; however, I agree with the reason that much information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate.
Granted, some information could be mistrusted because it may well be proven false in the future. For example, long ago, the Catholic Church adamantly believed in geocentricism, the notion that the Earth was the center of the universe. although this information was factual at that time, later Nicolaus copernicus proved the heliocentric model, the concept that the sun is located at the center of the world. since the fact was mistrusted, copernicus was able to inculcate others with the truth. he sis not take facts at face value, so he rectified a misconception in the science community. Therefore, some facts should be mistrusted.
although facts can be erroneous at times, not all pieces of information should be mistrusted. To illustrate, the basic fundamentals of mathematics are facts that should not be denounced. fundamentals, such as addition and subtraction, are concepts that students memorize and apply in their studies. this is because they are factual and the foundation for advanced studies. If students mistrust any information, it would undermine the authority of teachings and hamper their learning progress. mistrusting any fact can take toll on society.
Moreover, the author’s reason is valid because much information that people assume is factual actually is inaccurate. For many decades, many people believed that human flight was impossible. however, the Wright brothers later proved that this concept was inaccurate by designing an airplane with a strong engine, wings and propellers. since they assumed that many pieces of information were not accurate, people are able to enjoy cutting-edge technology and live much more convenient lives. thus, many so-called facts can be inaccurate and disproven.
In summary, although much information may be inaccurate, not any piece of information should be mistrusted. thus, people should go the extra mile to discover the truth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 335.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46567164179 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97551603938 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510447761194 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0559133022 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1904761905 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9523809524 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61904761905 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.568802437621 0.243740707755 233% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164392250523 0.0831039109588 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179336786775 0.0758088955206 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.357987272413 0.150359130593 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131150040034 0.0667264976115 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.