The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
These days, there is very fast development of technology in the world, so the paces of our life are substantially quick. it yields many problems and advantages. I disagree with the statement that the increasingly rapid pace of life today does not cause more problems than it solves.
Granted, technological development results in some problems. Take transportations for example. many transportations like automobiles, trains, and airplanes were invented in the 20th century. Since then, people have advanced them persistently. however, with this advancement, environmental problems such as air pollution occurred. Amount of fuel and gas used to motivate transportations makes harmful molecules and they adulterate the fresh air. The problem is more severe by increasingly quicker development of transportation and excessive products of vehicles. Indeed, environmental crisis including air pollution and soil pollution by trash of vehicles increase today. thus, some problems are caused by rapid pace of life with transportation development.
however, a rapid growth of technology solves many problems than it causes. In particular, a cutting-edge technology like hybrid cars or electric cars is a solution for the above problems. The cars rarely effect air pollution. like this, people also make efforts to invent a new technology to solve the issues by other new technology. Of course, people go extra miles to develop a technology to solve the intrinsic problems not by state-of-the-art technology. The above transportations are originally invented to solve travel problems like far distances. many people can go anywhere, even some rich men can go to the universe if they want to by the transportation development. Moreover, a state-of-the-art technology in communication solves a myriad of problems. this advancement significantly contributes the rapid pace of our life. The Internet makes people be able to obtain new information and communicate with any others in the world. Although two people sit chairs in the counterpart of the earth right now, they can communicate with each other just by using SNS like Instagram or Facebook. also, they can use phone calls. like this, a plethora of methods for communication exists now, and the rapid advancement of technology have generated them. thus, a rapid pace of our life by beneficent technology in many fields, such as the transportation and the communication, resolves more problems than it causes.
In brief, we don’t need to afraid of problems by the increasingly rapid speed of life today. it will solve the problems and give more quick life to people. thus, a cutting-edge technology which makes our life affluent should be acclaimed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, even so, for example, in brief, in particular, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47971360382 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31737092386 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491646778043 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7342555869 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.1724137931 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4482758621 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96551724138 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205975372113 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065038953076 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083265718999 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174808723589 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779814558442 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.