The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
This topic raises a controversial issue whether the increasingly rapid pace of life today causes moe problems than it solves. Indisputably, the new inventions have amerliorated our lives. Nevertheless, it has caused many problems in our social life like social apathy. Thus, I generally agree with the opinion that the rapid pace has increased the problems.
First of all, the life today is becoming faster and faster. I would like to point out that in today’s world, use of mobile phones, transportation, flights is ecumenical. But due to them, the frivolous behaviour towards social responsibility is burgeoning. To illustrate this, take an example of a family, living in a metro city, both husband and wife working day and night to eke out living to sustain their expenses. As both of them are doing 9 to 5 job, they don’t’t have ample time for their parents, children and friends. They can’t imbibe necessary virtues and morals in their children. This is also one of the reason why the number of old homes is increasing drastically now a days. Everyone is busy in their quotidian life and have no work-life balance. They are always in hurry. This deleterious for the social life. The generation today no more have many cardinal relations. In this circumstances, it is glarinlgly obvious that the kind of social apathy is prevailing and it is spreading in a insidious way.
Furthermore, due to the rapid city life the issue of mental health as well as physical health is exacerbating. The hospitals today are inundated with the patients of anxiety, depression, loneliness etc. As they don’t have any real friends to share the problems, they have to take a professional life and even if they have true friends, nobody has time in their busy schedule.The number of sucide cases are increasing day by day due to mental health. Moreover, people hardly find time for physical exercises so obesity level is climbing. This culminates into diseases like heart attack, blood pressure, etc. Also the patience level is decreasing because the people want everything at the very moment. This leads to anxiety attack and many other issues. Also crimes are increasing as people are not able to cop up with their opulent lifestyle. Cases of cyber frauds, cyber crimes are increasing which leads to mental tribulations and ultimately anxiety.
Admittedly, in today’s world , as transportation, communication everything has become faster and better, the distances has become shorter. In a minute, you can contact in the other part of the world and gain the necessary information and help someone from thousands of miles away. You can send money to your parents even of you are away from them. However, the above argument doesn’t constitute a sufficient support to claim that that it has not created the problems.
In conclusion, although the rapidity has solved many problems but it has increased severe threats and trepidations among people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'job' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
...enses. As both of them are doing 9 to 5 job, they don't't have ample time...
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Line 5, column 698, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... of old homes is increasing drastically now a days. Everyone is busy in their quotidian li...
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Line 5, column 702, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...old homes is increasing drastically now a days. Everyone is busy in their quotidian li...
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Line 5, column 908, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...o more have many cardinal relations. In this circumstances, it is glarinlgly obvious...
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Line 5, column 1018, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a insidious way" with adverb for "insidious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...pathy is prevailing and it is spreading in a insidious way. Furthermore, due to the rapid cit...
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Line 5, column 1021, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hy is prevailing and it is spreading in a insidious way. Furthermore, due to...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... nobody has time in their busy schedule.The number of sucide cases are increasing d...
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Line 9, column 759, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...o anxiety attack and many other issues. Also crimes are increasing as people are not...
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Line 13, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... Admittedly, in today's world , as transportation, communication everyt...
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Line 13, column 436, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...onstitute a sufficient support to claim that that it has not created the problems. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2501.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1673553719 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94767057586 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543388429752 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 784.8 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0600227073 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3666666667 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21587251965 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498990743014 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552615336111 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118511073711 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552296947855 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 100.480337079 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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