Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
To address the issue raised in the statement, it is important to clarify what it means to be a hero. I would consider a hero and role model if it has positive impact on the public. Also, leading people and trend in society. Given this understanding of a hero and role model, I tend to disagree with the statement insofar as a hero and role model might not be the best character that represent the society and there could be other better ways to understand the society.
First and foremost, in my perspective, author’s claim about heros’ representative of the society ideals is not always unqualified, because, people usually praise and extol heroes not like them due to their personalities or characters have reflected ideals in the society. Those who would support the speaker might point out that it is often to became a hero due to what he/she have done and he/she have ideal thought and behavior that the society is looking for. However, we can illustrate several heroes that people praise and like them because they have advantages that people do not have or is very rare in the society. For instance, Sports star such as Michel Jordan or Pelphes, they are very well known heroes who achieved their career goal in their life and made whole nations happy and zealot.
Another reason why I essentially disagree with the speaker is that role models is one of the character that people want to be look like, not always share the society’s ideal characters. people tend to set a role models in order to set a goal and motivate myself to become like he/she. Of course, there are many notable exceptions to reasons of becoming role models and a contrary view would reveal that role model usually present their characters of the society because it has choose from the the society such as Hillary Clinton from the women in United States. Nonetheless, role model cannot always represent the group which is from since it is very common to change the role model as getting old or environment changed. For example, young girls and mature women’s role model is quite different and it would be changed based on their needs.
Even if heroes and role models have ideal characters of the society, it might not the best way of understanding the society. it is very possible to find out other better ways to estimate the society such as natural environment and culture, history.
By and large, there are both for and against the statement. I believe that the issue is unreliable to some extent because heroes and role models are not always have highest ideal in that society and there could be other better ways to understanding the society than understanding heroes and role models.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ten to became a hero due to what he/she have done and he/she have ideal thought and ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...due to what he/she have done and he/she have ideal thought and behavior that the soc...
^^^^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...re the society's ideal characters. people tend to set a role models in order to s...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...haracters of the society because it has choose from the the society such as Hillary Cl...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... the society because it has choose from the the society such as Hillary Clinton from th...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... the society because it has choose from the the society such as Hillary Clinton from th...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... best way of understanding the society. it is very possible to find out other bett...
^^
Line 9, column 161, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
...e heroes and role models are not always have highest ideal in that society and there could b...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, well, for example, for instance, of course, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2236.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 465.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80860215054 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55994385127 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445161290323 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 722.7 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1522564548 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.529411765 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3529411765 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390288428013 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13516051901 0.0831039109588 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113731804759 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260775428797 0.150359130593 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711672493814 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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