To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
To address the issue raised in the statement, it is important to clarify what it means the highest ethical and moral standards. I would consider the ethical if it is a rule that people had agreeed to keep and follow in order to maintain the system of the society. On the other hand, the moral standards is a concept which people share and consider as a rule to follow to make the society goes well and not agianst the intricsic ... of everyones. Given this understanding of the ethical and moral standards, I tend to disagree with the statement insofar as effective leader should have the hightest ethical and moral standards. however, we should bear in mind that there are some exceptions and extent that we should consider too.
First and foremost, in my perspective, the quthor's claim about the hightest ethical is unacceptable, because, maintaining ethical is very important to letting the society goes well with the established systems but hightest ethical is to exceed the extent and it is also common to have some exceptions when it comes to urgent or far-reaching political or social issues. Those who would support the speaker might point out that everyone should follow the instruction and system 100 percentage whenever and whatever, otherwise people would not beileve the leader and leader could not lead people successfully and effectively. however, highest ethical is not always neccessary for the effective leader. For instance, leader should keep the systems and agreement among people for effectiveness and authority but some exceptions are always required for the quick and effective decisions.
Another reason why I essentially disagree with the speaker is that the moral standards is not the most required and important factor when we consider the effective leader. Generraly, the effective leader needs to be acumen, have insight and leadership for cultivate other people to achive the goals. Of course, there are may notable exceptions and a contrary view would reveal that the leader with the hightest moral standars would more easily persuade the nation to move forward together. Nonetheless, the effective leader is not a saint and we evaluate the leader based on what they did and achieved. For example, Bill Clinton, the past president in the U.S. and evaluated as an one of the presidents who stimulate the economy, but he experienced the scandal with the Rwinsky who was a intern in the white house.
Furthermore, we also should concede that ethical and moral standars are not always go together. Sometimes ethical standards are not compatible with the moral standars. For instance, the attorney-client provillage, lawyers should keep the client's secret even if it is not moral. however, every lawyers should keep the previllege to maintaining the systems by the American Bar Association. Thus, the effective leader could have the ethical standars which is not moral standards.
By and large, there are both for and against the statement. I believe that the issue is unreliable to some extent because highest ethical and moral standards is not the most important factor to become the effective leader, there are many exceptions during the work and decisions. also, ethical and moral are not always compatible, they are contradict under the some situations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...e hightest ethical and moral standards. however, we should bear in mind that there are ...
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Suggestion: However
...ad people successfully and effectively. however, highest ethical is not always neccessa...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
...le successfully and effectively. however, highest ethical is not always neccessary for th...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... president in the U.S. and evaluated as an one of the presidents who stimulate the...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ed the scandal with the Rwinsky who was a intern in the white house. Furtherm...
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Suggestion: However
...clients secret even if it is not moral. however, every lawyers should keep the preville...
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Suggestion: Also
...ceptions during the work and decisions. also, ethical and moral are not always compa...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contradicted'.
Suggestion: contradicted
...ral are not always compatible, they are contradict under the some situations.
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...mpatible, they are contradict under the some situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, of course, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2763.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 534.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17415730337 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72897580335 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423220973783 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 864.0 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0713139232 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.590909091 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68181818182 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236424325544 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770781322509 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585924456371 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145007025496 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230086956629 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.