The claim could be said true as most of the MnC and politicians live in big cities. So to burgeon them it is required to fund them enough so that country could improve economically. But in a country like India economy is based upon agriculture and so money should be spent more pastoral region as compared to urban areas.
In India since more than 65% of population live in rural areas so the culture and tradition are preserved in the roots of villages only. People find themselves often alone in cosmopolitan area as compared to villages where every festivals are celebrating being together.Tradition and culture are being faded more and more as everyone is moving to live city's life.
The reason that being stated is wrong because it is not the cities in which nation's culture are preserved but government should spend money in Major cities to preserve these culture and tradition as these are being faded throughout the time. On the contrary it should also not to be forgotten that India is based on agriculture economy so more funding should be given to them as compared to this.
To examplify A place called Vidarbha nearby Mumbai faces farmer suicide more than anywhere else in the world. Economy of that place is based upon cotton trading. Since prices in the internation market are beign decreased day by day because of funding provided by other government in much greater extent than India. Agriculture of cotton requires great amount of electricity in order to irrigate the fields but since almost all of the eletricity are given to major cities like Mumbai, they are not getting anything which leads them to suicide.
In crux I concede that metro cities require money for tradition to be preserved but there is more requirement of fundig to be given in rural areas to sustain the agriculture which should be the primarily focus of government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Tradition
...estivals are celebrating being together.Tradition and culture are being faded more and mo...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...d culture are being faded more and more as everyone is moving to live citys life. ...
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Line 7, column 424, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...to irrigate the fields but since almost all of the eletricity are given to major cities li...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'as to', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240963855422 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.210843373494 0.157235817809 134% => OK
Adjectives: 0.078313253012 0.0880659088768 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0542168674699 0.0497285424764 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0301204819277 0.0444667217837 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.159638554217 0.12292977631 130% => OK
Participles: 0.0843373493976 0.0406280797675 208% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.60429194549 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0481927710843 0.030933414821 156% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0692771084337 0.0997080785238 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0210843373494 0.0249443105267 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0120481927711 0.0148568991511 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1863.0 2732.02544248 68% => OK
No of words: 318.0 452.878318584 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85849056604 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323899371069 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22641509434 0.280924506359 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150943396226 0.200843997647 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0943396226415 0.132149295362 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60429194549 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 219.290929204 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487421383648 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 49.025581231 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 26.5 23.380412469 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.863405809 59.4972553346 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.25 141.124799967 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 23.380412469 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 49.141509434 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.64285714286 1.64882698954 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332409198164 0.391690518653 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157815679524 0.123202303941 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.087643150821 0.077325440228 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.628856310057 0.547984918172 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178230188878 0.149214159877 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150418430036 0.161403998019 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682546032891 0.0892212321368 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.322887484516 0.385218514788 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0194887609849 0.0692045440612 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223937603287 0.275328986314 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379807290429 0.0653680567796 58% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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