Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
The author claims that may problems of modern society cannot be solved by the laws and legal system , and as a reason he states that laws cannot chnage what is in people's heart or mind. The author is talking about the inability of the laws to prevent the crime occuring in the modern society .
I mostly agree with the author , however a law is always required to punish the wrong doings.
Firstly , crimes increasing these days like acid attacks,rape and cyber bullying are occuring inspite of the plethora of laws on the same .people are aware of the illeagal and immoral nature of their activities but they are determined in taking their revenge , or getting the physical satisfaction that they often ignore the result of those crimes. they are pushed by thier inner feelings and laws seem ineffective in such case .
Secondly , another unsolvable problem that the modern society faces is the addiction of the internet and social media . The use of the smartphones and internet is increasing the depression among the teenagers , divorce among the married couples and the feeling of detachment from their younger ones among the older ones.
these are the problems that the law and legal system cannot eradicate. these are not crimes theses are just human hearts wanting to do their own To controlsuch problems the circle in which individual stays effect the most . so such problems can be so solved more effectively by good parenting or good moral support..
Finally, Although laws cannot change people's mind and force the people with depression to be happy , but law can stop cyber bullying , it cannot guess who is trying to do some immoral but it can atleast punish them and warn others .
In conclusion , law is not the only entity that can solve the problems existing in the society , a invidual himself need to be aware of his doings and circle themself with positive people to influence positive environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95356037152 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48199990292 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532507739938 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8423794457 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.21951772744 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.487645938798 0.243740707755 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182699698446 0.0831039109588 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.203325414017 0.0758088955206 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216588674694 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.193146163623 0.0667264976115 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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