Claim Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system Reason Laws cannot change what is in people s hearts or minds Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason

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Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claims is based.

The above statement claim that problems of modern society would not completely solve by introducing laws and legal system because laws falis to change the mind of people and whatever they believe. I mostly disagree with the claim and provided reason and I will explain my reasons.
First of all, democracy and parliament system is a valuable contribution of humankind in recent centuries. This governing system is designed to be adopted by the changing needs of the society. There are lots of rules that are abandoned these days due to changing the situations and changing the needs of the society. For instance, there was a alcohol prohibition in the united states before second war but when the parliament understood that this prohibition could lead to crime, they decide to cancel this law. Thus, the legal system could be plastic for different needs in different era.
Moreover, parliament system is flexible to every scope of everyday life so they could adapt the laws of the country with modern problems. For instance, after conducting some crime in social media in Iran, the government decide to introduce laws in related to them. Then, any people that do crime in this area would be arrested by police and the court would decide about his or her crime. Therefore, legal system could adjust itself with the continues changing problems in the modern society.
The reason maintains that law could not change the mind and heart beliefs of people. I could not accept this idea. I believe in long term laws and parallely cultural activities could change the beliefs of a society. For instance, before introducing the freedom of black people in the united states, it had not been acceptable for alot of people that blacks have the same right as others. These days it is acceptable for most of people in the united states.
In conclusion, I could not agree with the claim and the reason because I believe parlimant and legal system are flexible to adjust the rules according to the needs of the society. In addition, by introducing laws and cultural activities changing minds of people would be possible.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of the society. For instance, there was a alcohol prohibition in the united state...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...djust itself with the continues changing problems in the modern society. The rea...
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Line 4, column 420, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...others. These days it is acceptable for most of people in the united states. In conclusion, I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92415730337 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50816587088 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457865168539 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3014365901 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3888888889 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279397328871 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981110307553 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081517755651 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195635881425 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100673052804 0.0667264976115 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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