Claim: When planning courses, educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students.
Reason: Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying.
In todays world we can see there are different fields of courses available for students and it is easy to select one of their liking course. In todays scenario student always prefer to do something which is more intresting and beneficial for their career.In my opinion while planning any course, educators should take into account the intrest and suggestiond of their students.
First, when any student select particular course he/she always take a glance on what the course id offereing in the first. If that student like offering stubjets and pattern of course then and only student will select that particular course.For instance , a student is applying for graduation he/she take a look on what that course is offering if they like the pattern and subjects of that course then they will apply for that course otherwise till they find something intresteing they wont apply for any course. These is basic pysocology of students when they take something more intresting they always perform 100 percent to achive or to complete entire course with higher grade and they get more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying.
Secondly it is important to take into account the interest and suggestions of their students, because when any suggestions accepted from students and take into account its more beneficial for students and as well as for teachers and also for a institution. For instance, if student gives suggestions like for more practical sessions for science subject and if educators add these suggestions definitely students get motivated and interested in what they are studying.On the other hand if educators plan a course according to their knowledge may be then that course will more difficult for students and even it is not much intrested then obviously student wont pay attention properly on that course.Furthermore student will avoid to take that course and try to find something more interested for them. But if educators try to add more interesting syllabus will attrackt to student to take that course and even student also get motivation to complete that course. For example,if educators add few on field trip which will help to gain more practical knowledge for their students or add few assignment which basis on these field trip.These are the few examples which can take into account,so students will get motivated and they are more interested in what they are studying.Also adding few extra subjects which student like and can get extra credits will also give motivation to study well.
To sum up,student always in search of interseted courses and if they found these types of courses they will more intresested to complete those courses.If educators take into account the interests and suggestions of their student then student are more motivated to learn what they are studying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, of course, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2378.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67581158274 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.387931034483 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 734.4 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.274276455 60.3974514979 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 237.8 118.986275619 200% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.4 23.4991977007 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.8 5.21951772744 360% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455359447399 0.243740707755 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23860224106 0.0831039109588 287% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126131581926 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326734262218 0.150359130593 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990174571514 0.0667264976115 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.9 14.1392134831 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 48.8420337079 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.1743820225 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.