College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The focus of introduction of the passage is that college students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that intrest them rather than courses that leads to job and provide them employment. In my point of view, I am completely agreed with the given prompt as it will make the future bright for the students. Many relevant examples will be provided to prove that given prompt is valid.
Firstly, let's take example of current scenario of Engineering student in India. Around 1.3 Million students appear for JEE exams whih stands for Joint Entrance Exam for getting in engineering colleges. Now after taking admissions the students does not know how to be prepare for industry-ready. After the course of 4 years, only 13% of those engineering student were suitable for job. Rest of them were unemployed or switch there business. So the main reasons for all this problemis that students are not opting subject according to their own choice rather they prefer adviceof other person only.To improve this problem many counseling fairs or awareness programs should be planned by Higher Secondary Schools to provide subjects according to there area of intrests.
In another example,let's take example of famous actor Jhonny Depp who joined bio-technology as his major subject who was forced by his parents.But as soon as he realized that his heart lies in the field of acting he change his careert and moved to Los Angeles to fulfillbis dream and start studying in one of the best acting schools. Now we can see that he is one opf then top richest actor in the world and he is widely known for his acting skills.Thus it proves that college student should follow and take subject according to indiviual interests.
On the other hand,there are might be students who might be confused about the area of interests or belonging to poor family where paying tution fees for such expensive courses is impossible. In such cases, the studentmust opt for the subject that definetly provides him employment. This courses provide him opportunity to fulfill his demands and raise family.However, he should not learning and after being in a better situation, he can opt for subject that suits his area of intrests.
In conclusion, many examples were provided that states that college students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs. The feeling of satisfaction is more necessaary than money. As feeling of satisfaction leads to over-all development of student but money only buys things but we can't buy happiness with it. So in this way many relevant examples were provided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, so, then, thus, as for, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2217.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 439.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05011389522 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66545566046 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535307517084 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.0155225223 60.3974514979 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3888888889 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231500124228 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820803565211 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111348161391 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147146285416 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087355980025 0.0667264976115 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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