People attend college or university for many different reasons for example new experiences career preparation increased knowledge Why do you think people attend college or university Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Do you agree or

Essay topics:

People attend college or university for many different reasons (for

example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge).

Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific

reasons and examples to support your answer.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are

the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support

your answer.

University or colleges are the places which provides higher education in different fields such as science, arts, management, music and business. Many students enrolled themselves in universities according to there area of interests to gain knowledge and to live a prosporous life. What some people think that university are very important in over all development of student whereas others believe that universities are not required to gain knowledge. According to me, universities play an important role in imparting knowledge and prepare themselves for there future endeavors so people must attend university.

Firstly, I want to mention about the knowledge provided by university to that particular student. An university designs its cirriculum or syllabus on basis of regular outcomes from highly experienced Professors and other experts. Now by referring these universities syllabus will definetly help in gaining knowledge regularly. For an example, Massechutes Institute of Technology which is considered as "Mecca for mechanical engineering and computer-science engineering" plays an significant role in new inventions in today's world.

Secondly, the student gain new experiences while moved to pursue a higher education. He met new people and new culture which provide him an experience to became an successful person in life. To justify this point of view, I would consider my example as I live in only one city from my childhood that's why I knew all my school friends and other people very well. But after my higher secondary school, I got admission in a college at Bengaluru, which is 1200 Kilometers from my hometown. In Bengaluru, I met lot of new people and make very new friends who taught me different valueable-lessons for my life.

Additionally, the main prespective of university is in the career prepration. In university specially departments are established which provide various career opportunities as well as job opportunities which will be benificial for indiviual student. This opportunities also make contacts with indusry-oriented experts which would eventually help to get a great job.

In conclusion, students who go to univesity get many opportunities related to career-growth, earning handsome-money and gaining knowledge. Thus, we can conclude that university or college play an important role in student's growth.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 452, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ies are not required to gain knowledge. According to me, universities play an important role in...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
... university to that particular student. An university designs its cirriculum or sy...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'universities'' or 'university's'?
Suggestion: universities'; university's
...d other experts. Now by referring these universities syllabus will definetly help in gaining...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...omputer-science engineering' plays an significant role in new inventions in t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ificant role in new inventions in todays world. Secondly, the student gain new ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ich provide him an experience to became an successful person in life. To justify t...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...live in only one city from my childhood thats why I knew all my school friends and ot...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...ll be benificial for indiviual student. This opportunities also make contacts with i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61731843575 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36406564645 2.67179642975 126% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567039106145 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5265941076 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.722222222 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227466582015 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758196525526 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406651927507 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12343375545 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573007729747 0.0645574589148 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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