Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life of every person starts from childhood to old-age. Every person in his/her life do lot of entertaining things. What other people thinks that older people enjoy life more than young people. But, I believe that young people enjoy life more than older people. In my point of view, I am completely agree with the claim made by the author.
First, I want to take example of my grandfather who is suffering from heart diseases and knee-pain is now unable to move or eat according to his own wish. Old people generally suffering from diseases and disorders thus they are unable to eat or move anything according to their own choices. They have to take medicines described by the doctor,whereas young people has liberty to travel, eat or do anything he wants to do. They are energetic, full of enthusiasm and able to do anything.
Secondly, the young people are also involved in different activities. Life is like an adventure for young people because they meet new people,visit new places and learn about different culture. In converse, the old people's life is fullof disappointment due to their sufferings. They used to enjoy there old days by remembering those old days. They have infinite number of memories which help them in survive and becomes strength to fight all difficulties. Young people are busy in different outdoor and indoor activities such as trekking, hill-climbing, swimming and playing other sports. They also prefer to travel new places and do not want to get serious in life.
In this way, we can conclude that young people enjoy more life than older people do. The old people are the peoplen who are full of suffering waiting for there death whereas young people are full of joy and happiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...e. In my point of view, I am completely agree with the claim made by the author. ...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , whereas
...o take medicines described by the doctor,whereas young people has liberty to travel, eat...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , visit
...oung people because they meet new people,visit new places and learn about different cu...
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Line 9, column 216, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...different culture. In converse, the old peoples life is fullof disappointment due to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8976109215 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59438650956 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529010238908 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4094819371 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7222222222 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368816441992 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130760238946 0.076458572812 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115750484646 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252758439633 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098686792693 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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