Do You Agree Or Disagree With The Following Statement? Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Use Specific Reasons and Examples To Support Your Opinion
I, personally agree with the assertion that young people enjoy life more than older people do. I feel this way for a couple of reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, young people are very energetic than older people, and have passion to do things. For example; my father is 65 years old and is retired. He spends nearly his all time at home watching TV, reading a piece of newspaper and talking to his friends on the phone. He, actually does nothing enjoyable. If his grandchildern go to his house, he takes them to a park to watch them playing, I think it is the most exiting thing he does. But I am only 21 years old, and find lots of things to do like, meeting with friends outside home, going to shopping malls, visiting historical places in my town, and so on.
Furthermore,However, I believe that older people experienced lots of things when they were young. So, they are not interested in enjoyable things anymore. I think being old means relaxing, having fun with grandchildren and just taking your time. My own experience is a good example of this. When I talk to may grandfather to do something that young people want to do, such as walking on the beach, going abroad and so on. He has no interest and always tells me that he did all of the things in this life, and doing things that I tell him, does not satisfy him anymore.
Lastly, young people can not discover all the things in life in one day. So, every other day, they experience new things that make them having fun. Actually, although the new experiences are not good all the time, young people have ability to overcome bad things and this also make them enjoy life.
In conclusion, some people may say that older people enjoy life than younger ones, However, I think that older people have left the enjoyable things in the back and now they just take their time. However, young people have enthusiasm to do things. They try new things every day in their life and having new experiences that pleasure them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, so, thus, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54395604396 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41276367915 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9044286758 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315156191219 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111448234252 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132266368954 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22401599388 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120489590379 0.0645574589148 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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