Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.
People whether young or older want to get fun from the life. However, there are some restrictions to enjoy in the life for young or older people. The issue that young people enjoy life more than older people do, or not has been debated for years. While some people think that being young is better to get fun from the life, others claim that due to their experiences, people enjoy life more than young people do. Though both sides have pros and cons, I think young people are luckier than older people for enjoying life. I will explain my claims in the following paragraphs with some details and examples.
Firstly, in my opinion young people can enjoy life more than older people do, because of the health related reasons. As you know, people's health get worse while they are getting older. Some pshicial sicknesses starts when a person get older such as tension, hearth problems, pains in arms or legs. For example, think a person who is in his/her 70s and he/she wants to join a trip. He/she can not resist the high movements of the trips, she/he can not walk for long times. Thus, he/she has to stay at home or join slientier happenings, and it is boring for her/him. On the other hand, a young person can easily deal with this high tempo.
Secondly, there are some social reasons that restrict older people to enjoy from life. When people get older, the number or their friends decreases. They have illness or they even died, so older people cannot find someone to enjoy together. However, the surroundings of young people are generally full. For example, they have friends from their jobs or they can join some facilities and get friends from there. Therefore, young people can receive more fun from the life with their friends.
Lastly, economical reasons is also another major reason for older people not to get fun from the life. Although some people think that older people are richer than the young ones, because of their experiences and their ages, I am in the opinion that due to the young people's energy, they can work hardly and gain more money. For instance, in my country people earn less money when they get retired, while the young people work more than one work and have higher salaries. Thus, people with less money can not enjoy life when they are dealing with the harsh conditions of life.
All in all, the idea of young people enjoy life more than older people do outweighs the idea of opposite of it. Young people are healthier than older people, so they can do whatever they want due to their high energy capacities, and they also have more friends to enjoy life together. Young people's high salaries provides them to get more fun from the life, too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...am in the opinion that due to the young peoples energy, they can work hardly and gain m...
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Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'work'.
Suggestion: hardly work
...e to the young peoples energy, they can work hardly and gain more money. For instance, in m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, such as, you know, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2222.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67789473684 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04117830291 2.67179642975 76% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408421052632 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9937824618 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4615384615 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2692307692 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.03846153846 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419943303954 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167252962011 0.076458572812 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120816467468 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302564387845 0.150856017488 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956679121104 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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