SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's original headquarters. Moreover, Middlesburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
In the given arguement, author has suggested that that SuperCorp made ther best decision by moving its headquarters to Corporateville. The assumption made by author were full of holes and bullets in it. I am completely disagree with the assumption made by author. The flaw in the assumption will be given along with the relevant examples to improve this flaws.
Firstly, the author has assumed that recent surge in number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that it is better place than Middleburg. Now the flaw in this assumption is that he has not described about the reason that why people start living in Corporateville. To improve this flaw, the author should mentioned about the reasons and provide more facts that why people tends to shift in Corporateville.
Secondly, author has clearly mentioned that Middlesburg is predominantly a urban area in which people prefer more to live as taxes were low such as Middlesburg. Now the flaw in this assumption is that taxes in the region depends on home area not on place where you live. To improve this flaw, thew proper measures should be taken to compare the taxes in both the region that is Corporateville and Middlesburg.
However, the employment survey that author has mentioned that SuperCorp workers prefer to live in area that is not urban. Now, it sounds be true as they do not like to live in such a place. Hence, we can conclude that SuperCorp people prefer to live in such area due to prefer amenities.
In summary, the author has made mistakes in his assumptions. T
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 262 350
No. of Characters: 1244 1500
No. of Different Words: 120 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.023 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.748 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.735 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 82 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 52 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.467 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.397 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.361 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.644 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.173 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...e given arguement, author has suggested that that SuperCorp made ther best decision by mo...
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Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...oles and bullets in it. I am completely disagree with the assumption made by author. The...
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Line 9, column 74, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ioned that Middlesburg is predominantly a urban area in which people prefer more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 2260.96107784 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 262.0 441.139720559 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92748091603 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83916364156 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 204.123752495 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480916030534 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 705.55239521 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6878402156 57.8364921388 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.2142857143 119.503703932 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.70786347227 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222316188291 0.218282227539 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789573867267 0.0743258471296 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884269495276 0.0701772020484 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103133026915 0.128457276422 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625376515809 0.0628817314937 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.3799401198 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.32208582834 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 98.500998004 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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