"A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."

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"A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."

In the given prompt, it states that the students of particular nation should require to study the same national curriculum before the college. The students of any country is an important asset of any nation. Thus education provided to students from school level will built there future of that country.I am completely agree with the given prompt suggested in the given prompt. Valid examples will be provided to support the given issue.

Let's take first example of ancient India known as Arya-Bharata in which there was no schooling system developed and there was no curriculum or syllabus provided to students.These students used to live and study in large dormantry homes known as Math or Gurukuls in which the saint used to provide them important lessons along with the deep essence of knowledge of living a healthy life.In this example, they used to teach same lesson to every student irrespective of there cultural background, ethical race or cast. This methodology of teaching proivde them a way to live a successful life.

Secondly, let's take example of mordern era of Indian education developed after independence in 1947. The central goverment has established a board known as Central Board of Secondarey Education(CBSE) whose main objective is conduction of exams, devlop a new syllabus which comes under national curriculum specially for sachooling level. It play a important role in developing schooling system in India after independence.

In converse, there are many students which belong to different caste, creed and different language. Sometimes, it may be possible that a student is unable to understand a particular subject in the class. In this case, special optional subjects should be provided to the students according to their area of interests. But, the important factor regarding opting a optional subject cannot be forced by parents, school-teachers or any other person. They should be provided right to opt subject of their own choice.

In conclusion, the education is the most important factor for any country as it provides humans new heights. As per given prompt enough examples were provided to prove the validity of the recommadation for the author. It can be proved that student of particular nation should study national curriculum until they enter college.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27520435967 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82037804078 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523160762943 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.757369355 60.3974514979 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.882352941 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227789518208 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797211932008 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110282874141 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128582296779 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563603922275 0.0667264976115 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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