The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the given prompt, it states that the best leaders are those who encourage feedback as review for success from the people whom they lead. From my point of view I am completely agree with the arguement made in the prompt. The best leader have a in-built quality that they take feedback from every type of team member they have in the team. Relevant examples will be provided which proves the validioty of given prompt.
In the first example, let's mention about famous entrepeunur of all time thatn is Steve Jobs. He served as CEO and founder of world renowned company Apple for making electronic gadgets and smartphones. He revolutianizes entire electronic gadgets industry. As being a famous leader, he continuously take feedback from his employees and ask them for new ideas for the new product those provide new heights of sucess. This feedbacks proves to be boon for Steve Jobs and for Apple Inc.
Additionally, let's take an another example of former Indian Cricket Team Captain Mahendra Singh Dhoni who is considered legend in the arena of Cricket. Even having a lot of experience in cricket, he always used to take advice from senior players such as Sachin Tendulkar, Rahul Dravid etc and also from Junior cricketers. The main reason for him to do so is that he takes advice for new ideas for the team regarding team-requirements and others. In this way, he create a bridge between senior and junior player which leads to unity of the team.
In the converse, from what type of people you are taking feedback also matters. In many cases, people gives wrong feedback to take revenge from person or may be any reason for hatred caused due to this. In history, there are many examples that shows that any miniser official has provided incorrect feedback whick leads to death of King. Thus person should be aware of the relationship with the persaon whom you are taking advice.
In the conclusion, bestleaders are those who looks for over-all development of people. They are responisble for the development of people associated to them. Proper advice or suggestion is a key factor in development of any aspect irrespective of there field. Many example were provided to prove the validity of the point of view. Hence, we conclude that best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ade in the prompt. The best leader have a in-built quality that they take feedbac...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gadgets'' or 'gadget's'?
Suggestion: gadgets'; gadget's
...es. He revolutianizes entire electronic gadgets industry. As being a famous leader, he ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
... being a famous leader, he continuously take feedback from his employees and ask the...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...ct those provide new heights of sucess. This feedbacks proves to be boon for Steve J...
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Message: You should probably use 'prove'.
Suggestion: prove
...e new heights of sucess. This feedbacks proves to be boon for Steve Jobs and for Apple...
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Suggestion: an example; another example
...le Inc. Additionally, lets take an another example of former Indian Cricket Team Captain M...
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Suggestion: creates
...equirements and others. In this way, he create a bridge between senior and junior play...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e you are taking feedback also matters. In many cases, people gives wrong feedback...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y reason for hatred caused due to this. In history, there are many examples that s...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... feedback whick leads to death of King. Thus person should be aware of the relations...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun example seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many examples'.
Suggestion: Many examples
...any aspect irrespective of there field. Many example were provided to prove the validity of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, look, may, regarding, so, thus, as for, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5460406973 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0029324126 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3636363636 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345876122502 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100577670816 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889866279701 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193980403214 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07695080058 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.