The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The research in 2017 conducted by Association of Democratic Reforms concluded that feedback is important, especially in politics, since people who are in charge for running the country must be willing to address the concerns of opposition groups as well. Moreover, feedback provides the opportunity to leader to look at one issue from different angles in order to find the overlooked areas. While there are no reservations that good leaders are those who encourage feedback mechanism, there are reasons to believe that such feedback often leads to waste of time, money and efforts that could have been better utilized. Feedback mechanism often involves multiple viewpoints for same issue which confound the leader and thus the leader finds himself/herself in quagmire and uses up precious time in ascertaining these viewpoints.
The first reason that supports the idea of running corporation without feedback is that some people are passionately follow their dreams and determined to achieve unprecedented results, but because of feedback their efforts are impeded. In corporate world, there are numerous examples of determined leader who had developed a product or service without heeding to the feedback given by their colleagues since they carry themselves with courage, perseverance and diligence which are required to be a successful leader. This can be exemplified by the development of Apple Mac computers, which Steve Jobs followed despite negative feedback from his colleagues that customers were accustomed to use computers with Microsoft applications. His perseverance led him to develop not only first computer without Microsoft application but also a computer which was free from any virus attack and it was the most elegant computer ever built that reinvigorated the Apple Corporation. Thus, leader should ignore feedback since colleagues do not know the passion of a leader which would bring landmark discovery.
Second though that buttresses the idea of repudiating the feedback and continuing with virtues gained through the analysis and study of poor and deprived sections of the society is that feedback often contradicts the virtue and thus prevents welfare measures. During the reign of British Society in India for more than two hundred years, many proponents of freedom stood against Britishers, but conceded because of differences in opinions and feedback among these proponents. A good example of this is Mahatama Gandhi who followed non-violence throughout his freedom struggle against Britishers. His biography released in 1956 concluded that the foundation of his perseverance and determined approach for non-violence was his understanding of the poor and deprived sections of India. During his struggle many other leaders were dubious about his intention of replacing the British imperial with that of Indian only by non-violence. Many leaders joined his pursuit and left because of the inconsistencies found in his and their virtue. However, in 1947 India got independence with the struggle that Britishers touted as non-violence. Therefore, feedback from friends, colleagues and co-workers is temporary and act as a hindrance to one's virtues.
However, one argument that upholds the idea of feedback is that it provides the opportunity to leader to understand issues from different angles. In political circle, especially during the time when laws are promulgated, it is necessary for a leader to support feedback since politicians sway by their vested interest and feedback from all concerned helps leader to understand the legislation comprehensively. For instance, the passing of AADHHAR Act in 2017 created raucous since this act mandated people to avail Government subsidies only with AADHHAR numbers. The motive of the Government was to prevent leakage and corruption in the subsidy distribution. The feedback from opposition was related to the misuse of data collected through AADHHAR Act and opposition suggested to create a vault for safeguarding the data. The leader of the parliament appreciated the concerns of opposition and established AADHHAR vault for prevention of data leak. Hence, feedback provides the opportunity to leader to fill the gap in process of achieving unprecedented results.
As can be seen from above paragraphs that although feedback affords the chance to leader to look at the issue from different angle and addressing it by allaying the concerns of opposition, it often prevents the discovery of novel ideas. Moreover, feedback comes from people who are seasoned and thus, by nature, reluctant to adopt or accept new ideas. Therefore, feedback must not be promoted for the discovery of new things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
...ck is that some people are passionately follow their dreams and determined to achieve ...
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Line 5, column 678, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to using'.
Suggestion: accustomed to using
...from his colleagues that customers were accustomed to use computers with Microsoft applications. ...
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Line 9, column 1233, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... is temporary and act as a hindrance to ones virtues. However, one argument th...
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Line 13, column 351, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'helps'' or 'help's'?
Suggestion: helps'; help's
...nterest and feedback from all concerned helps leader to understand the legislation co...
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Line 13, column 768, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested creating'.
Suggestion: suggested creating
...cted through AADHHAR Act and opposition suggested to create a vault for safeguarding the data. The ...
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Line 13, column 823, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eate a vault for safeguarding the data. The leader of the parliament appreciated th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.3162921348 239% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 119.0 58.6224719101 203% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3969.0 2235.4752809 178% => OK
No of words: 719.0 442.535393258 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52016689847 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.17824056563 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9595165292 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 343.0 215.323595506 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477051460362 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 1211.4 704.065955056 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3823162785 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6296296296 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25925925926 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213183040168 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627835152868 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358562634203 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129288746184 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042255558412 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 200.0 100.480337079 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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