The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Leadership is usually made or broke by the public perception of how the leader is. They must be able to make tough decisions to give a direction to those they lead. That said, they also need to know the opinions of those they are supposed to make decisions for.
The most basic outlook of a leader is usually seen in politicians. They are the ones who are supposed to work for the welfare of people. Naturally, this should come out as no surprise that popular leaders are those who puts general ideas of public in their manifesto and act on that. So, it becomes a fundamental nature in politics to ask for feedback from people for which they are assigned for.
Even if most adults have not encounter politicians themselves, they do encounter leaders in their offices. Even in offices, the above perception holds true. The most popular leaders are the ones who bring out the idea of their underlings by constantly asking for their opinion. This not only helps in providing more ideas to the company, but it also helps eliminate some redundant ideas that might not seems profitable to the company in the long run. If the public perception of a leader in corporate world is not good, they are either banished from the role or evicted from the company.
There are some caveats in getting feedback though. The feedback from public is usually not unanimous. It is very divided in opinion, usually driven by personal gains in the long run. This sometimes encourages sycophant decisions for a targeted audience in the long run. And it is true in any field, even in the politics and the corporate world as mentioned above.
It can be easily said that the great leaders are usually are the ones who value and encourage the public feedback. But, the best leaders are the ones who tend to take hard decision and those decisions which are beneficial for general public in the long run, and not for a group of people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 30, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'encountered'.
Suggestion: encountered
... for. Even if most adults have not encounter politicians themselves, they do encount...
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Line 17, column 58, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...said that the great leaders are usually are the ones who value and encourage the pu...
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Line 17, column 227, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...hose decisions which are beneficial for general public in the long run, and not for a group of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, as to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70118343195 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40655332314 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470414201183 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8110395341 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6315789474 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21052631579 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204181005473 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659383779244 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545715125875 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127569275274 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541713014945 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.