The charts below show three types of police reports from the city of Johnstown in 2016 along with Johnstown s average monthly temperature Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The charts below show three types of police reports from the city of Johnstown in 2016, along with Johnstown’s average monthly temperature.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bargraph shows the number of police reports registered for theft, noise complaints and traffic violations quarterly for the town on Johnstown in the year 2016. Also, the below graph shows the average temperature observed each month in Johnstown for the calendar year 2016.

As it can be seen from the bargraph, amongst all the violations, the traffic violations reported quarterly has been at the peek for each quarter for the year 2016. Also, the trend is same for the least number of police reports, with noise complaints taking the bottom for the entire calendar year.

The temperature-month graph shows that the average temperature in Johnstown was at it's least in the month of January. After that month, the average temperature steadily climbed up and reached it's peek in the month of July. After July, there was a steady decline in average temperature each month till the end of the year.

Also, for both graphs, it can be seen that there is a correlation between the theft reports in bargraph and the average temperature in the other graph. Both of them reported their least outputs at start of the year, showing an increase in the middle of the year and again declining in the last quarter of 2016.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87439613527 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5452657147 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458937198068 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.348295755 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246400701262 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127849295085 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659198399265 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165127730046 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065978132819 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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