The charts below show three types of police reports from the city of Johnstown in 2016, along with Johnstown’s average monthly temperature.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts in question represent two types of data one pertaining to the number of crime reports of three types of crimes - theft, noise and traffic violations while the other graph is representative of the average temperatures recorded in each month , in 2016 of the city of Johnstown.
As per the graphical report, it is evident that traffic violations are most common police report all through the year with the months of January, February and March registering the maximum cases. Although on a closer look, a downward trend in the cases of traffic violations is observed, from with the months of July, August and September recording the lowest cases under 150 . But again in the post-September months an upward trend in the violation cases is observed. The graph shows a constant trend for complaints regarding noise. Unlike, traffic violation cases, the theft reports show an upward rise in the first six months(from 20 to 50 ) of 2016 , but suddenly booms in the next three months to reach nearly 140 by September but thievery reports plummet in the months following September to drop to 55. Also in the time period of July-September The graph pertaining to the average monthly temperature also shows a trend quite similar to the graphical pattern of theft cases. We observe a continuous rise in temperature from the coldest month of January (3 degrees) which attains the maximum in July and plummets thereafter.
So as per graphical data, we can see that thefts are more on the rise during the peak summer months , while traffic violation cases remain a high all year round.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93984962406 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69987167525 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0835958088 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235781860124 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954940110115 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718750750689 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152853048746 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098001362481 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.