Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In Frank Herbert's words"Technology is both a tool for helping humans and destroying them.It is the paradox of our times which we are compelled to face." This line pretty much sums up the topic. So as we can see technology is a double-edged sword.It is up to the master on how efficiently to wield this word. Today we are facing one of the greatest threats to our extinction , the environment is changing and so in these dark times we always look upon technology as our "The Savior" , otherwise " the first generation to starve will be the last generation to breathe.So it is imperative to use technology to solve our problems.
I would like to begin with the fact that non-renewable energy resources have caused intense damage to our environment from ozone layer depletion to global warming that has pushed us to look beyond them. This brings us to utilize other resources like solar , tidal, hydro, to replace the conventional ones. But unlike the non-renewable ones , they are not efficient in extracting the same amount of energy at a lower or optimized cost. At this critical juncture , improving technology is the best way to move forward. Today dams , solar panels , wind farms generate energy at almost the same cost as that of a thermal power plant.
Moving forward, the rapid urbanization and industrialization has created a big problem for the water bodies, which are unable to sustain the natural eco-system it nurtured. This is mostly the result of water pollution , caused by a plethora of factors from washing clothes , open defaection to dumping of harmful chemicals and sewage into them. This adversely affects the environment and the humans living by it. So to mitigate this problem , today we have advanced technologies like filters, sewage treatement plants that work round the clock ensuring the safety of the waters.
Looking back , it can be introspected that technology has lead us to this dangerous situation in the first place , just like an iron can only cut be cut by iron, similarly technology itself holds the key to the most important environmental problems the world faces today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, similarly, so, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02549575071 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98126507584 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594900849858 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2860166518 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.461538462 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156644877755 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466215906041 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545878609894 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998346598364 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063946917357 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.