Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Various forms of technologies are invading our homes at such a progressive rate that on an average with each passing day we encounter an enitrely novel product based on some new and advanced scientific and mathematic experiments. Some people always have positive outlook for these invasions while others always remain skeptical about their usage. Eventually, it raises a question whether these advancement can actually act as a boon to solve several environmental problems that world faces today? Some people are of the opinion that many envrionmental problem will soon get resolved by these techonlogies while others are of the view that technologies might not be that beneficial in solving environmental issue that haunt todays world. In my opinion, i mostly agree with the people that believe that technological advancement will serve a positive role in solving myriad of problems that our environment faces today. I feel this way for two reasons.
Firstly, technologies which can reduce our carbon emission per capita has been a focus of most of countries from past few decades. These focus have started to even give us some fruits in countries where their usage are being tested. For instance - Netherland's move toward electric cars saw significant improvement in its air quality from the time of its implementation. Similar projects around the world with their backbone relying heavily on new technological adavncement has begun prividing results in various sectors. Use of solar energy around the world is one such advancement, whose use has been viewed as a major step in tackling with the harmful gases that its alternate release otherwise. Acknowledgment of these products with constant effort to increase their efficiency and reduce cost will certainly make it possible to solve various issues faced by our environment.
Additionally, their are several technological advancement whose growth in recent year have shown to have indirect benefit to our enivronment. Data science advancement and applying knowlegde of analytics to copious amount of businesses is one such advancement. For example - companies nowdays use prediction models to predict amount of raw material that they have to order, and these predictions are so accurate that waste of unused material is reduced to minimum. Such waste can actually act as bane for our environment when it gets dumped in large quantity to ocean and river fronts. These indirect advancement have started to recognize their true potential and with increase in develpment of such techonlogies, our environment will cetainly benefit from their usage.
However, role of humans to not get complacent over time with whatever advancment in these field will definitely play an important role. Additionally, advertisement of such technologies to every remote corner of the world will equally play a significant role for these products to eradicate several environmental problems. In essance, technologies that are being made can actually make use of their true potential only when people accept these with open arms.
In conclusion, science and mathematics will continue making changes in the ways we live in this planet and applications of these field with contribution and involvement of people to advertise and apply them can certainly make huge difference in saving our environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.3376753507 348% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2820.0 1615.20841683 175% => OK
No of words: 521.0 315.596192385 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41266794626 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97108429544 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531669865643 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 907.2 506.74238477 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2165382162 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.285714286 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8095238095 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185772693461 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062249777741 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079590942525 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106252198133 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804900512024 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 78.4519038076 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.