Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental concerns have become a matter of concern throughout the world. Everybody, directly or indirectly, has suffered from violently changing milieu. Some people are of opinion that technology will serve as a boon to eradicate various environmental problems that earth currently faces. While others say that techonlogy will not be a major factor involved in solving these problems. In my opinion technology can help in reducing environmental problems that our world faces only to certain extent. I believe this for two reasons.
Firstly, technological advancements will soon bring products that would supplant already existing products that causes a lot of environmental hazards. We have seen how using electric cars in countries like sweden, and netherland resulted in significant reduction in carbon emission. Such innovations will soon become mainstream in near future as many countries have begun realizing the true potential of these discoveries.Similarly, we have seen that use of solar power is constantly increasing day by day. This can be observed by viewing planning and design structure used by various architect firms as they have now started to underpin benefits of solar energy to the investors. In addition to that technological advancements that are being made to predict weather patterns accurately have also saved many forests from abolishment. As such technological advancement are only going to increase in the near future we can say that such techonlogy will certainly be beneficial to the environment that is constantly struggling to breathe.
In addition to that, research sector has grown to such an extent that certain indirect factors that earlier used to result in various problems in environment like pollution, carbon emmission and waste etc., have also diminshed. For instance -nowdays we have seen that companies supply chain management have found techniques to reduce waste generated in packaging. Earlier this waste used to get generated in metric tonnes and dumped in ocean floors, but now from the influx of new techniques to reduce waste and cost actually benefit environment. As more and more organisation will soon begin to realize potential it is certain that technological advancement will certainly result in betterment of our environment.
Although technological advancement will certainly reduce number of environmental problems but saying that these technologies alone will be responsible will be too far fetched as people living in this planet will eventually have some role to make sure that the technology reaches right places at right time. Thus we can say that people contribution to make sure already developed technologies are advertiesed and imp-lemented and new advancements are encouraged by them will certain bring our environment to a better stage than its current one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, similarly, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2406.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51834862385 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11439514455 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522935779817 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 757.8 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3358843039 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192314016774 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066117676283 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691016723558 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139251906604 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704990410941 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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