As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
At first glance, the prompt given is on negative side that dependence of person on technology to solve problems decreasing as it reduces his capacity to think. In my views, the modern-man is completely depending on technology and limiting its own mental thinking capability. A modern day person should rely on its mental capability also to know his surroundings and to take his own decisions. It also flourishes his personality as he was depending on himself to do lot of activities.
Let’s take the first example of Smart-phones which are in the hands of every person including teenager, youth and even old ones. The smart-phone reduces the thinking-ability by providing all the information at one spot. A person can buy clothes, grocery and electronic devices on just single screen due to which its mental ability to think and his contact from physical world decreases. It also reduces the social-contact of a person by means of social-networking sites. Early, people used to go to fishing, shopping and on tourist place on there week-end but now, such public gathering are decreases. It makes the person isolated and make a new imaginary “Digital-world”.
Additionally, the disorders and diseases coming and spreading across globe due to technology such as Insomnia, Diabetes, Heart diseases increases at higher rate as compare to previous generations. The thinking of person is the inner mirror of his personality. But due to the dependence of technology, person stop thinking something innovative which is boon of technology.
On the other hand, technology has changed the person and gave birth to Modern-civilization. The presence of technology can predict the accurate time of natural-calamities due to which many steps can be taken such as evacuation and it provide enough time to take cautionary steps. A person can chat and text with any other person who is sitting in another part of world at very low cost. Technology make transportation easy due which he can travel from one place to other in very less time.
Thus, in conclusion every coin has two faces so same thing can be to technology as if we a person use it correctly then it will be success for him otherwise it will be boon for him. So it depends on person how to use it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...y to think. In my views, the modern-man is completely depending on technology and limiting its own ment...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...t also flourishes his personality as he was depending on himself to do lot of activities. Le...
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Line 4, column 234, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
... can be taken such as evacuation and it provide enough time to take cautionary steps. A...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... So it depends on person how to use it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, thus, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00795755968 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2868478472 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541114058355 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3855146949 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3684210526 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112626840693 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369582767079 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02669757196 0.0758088955206 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654099177719 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00652555874496 0.0667264976115 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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