Technology is becoming a must in everyone daily life. It makes our life easier and faster. However, the bad use of the technology can cause a completely reverse affect. The prompt states as much people is relaying on technology, their thinking ability will be affected. In my opinion, this is a narrow approach and weak judgment. Indeed, Technology helps us to make our brains more effective unless we use it in wrong way by stopping our minds.
Through years, Technology has been proven its capabilities in using our time effectively. Old times, when they did not have as strong as computational capabilities as we have, they used to spend very long time in doing simple tasks. For instant, researcher spend most of their time locking for resources manually in different books in library while nowadays, we spend less time by using internet. Additionally, instead of spending our time in trivial and simple thinks that can technology help us on, we can now invest our time and power in more important and complicated matters. Scientist, for instant, can work in develop new theories instead of doing long calculation. Also, businessman can invest their time in better planning rather than do statistical calculation.
Technology as well play great role in communication. It brings the big world to a small village. Using technology, we can get in touch with different part of the word in seconds. For example, I was able to be admitted in one of the far west university in united states. Also, without technology I might not know about GRE exam. Effective communication improves the efficiency of universities in doing research and corporation in running their businesses. Universities can look upto date inventors and research done by their peers in different part of world. Because of that, researchers can progress from where others stop and invest their time. They also can work together and learn from each other experiences. In business field is the same applied. Companies can make profits more by exploring other peers.
Despite these benefits of the technologies, there are some vital effect in using them. They are number of new mental diseases was discover or develop recently which technology is the main cause of them. Addiction to video games whither in portable devices or in big screen can leads to weaken social skills and difficulties in pronunciation. Not to mention the amount time spend in these games without benefit. A high number of children, for instant, spend most of the day time in endless game like, Fortnit. In result, they don’t use their brain in communicating with others or in studying which leads to weaken mental ability. Also, adult when uses navigation system tend to be blindly dependent on it which leads to lose gradually memories strength resulting forgetting the places and road very fast.
To sum up, Technology is a tool which can kill or make you stronger. Knowing how to use this tool can make you effective in time and communication. Otherwise, you will end up with freeze brain by overuse these technologies and badly addicted to wasting time applications. I recommend studying any type of these technologies and see how reflect our life before using them and only use the one which make you more effective.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ly reverse affect. The prompt states as much people is relaying on technology, their...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'discovered'.
Suggestion: discovered
...y are number of new mental diseases was discover or develop recently which technology is...
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Line 7, column 279, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...n portable devices or in big screen can leads to weaken social skills and difficultie...
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Line 7, column 811, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rgetting the places and road very fast. To sum up, Technology is a tool which ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, second, so, well, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2734.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 543.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0349907919 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80980857582 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 292.0 215.323595506 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537753222836 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 855.0 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2277481242 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4117647059 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9705882353 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55882352941 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138665128633 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363599006703 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417581614885 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904345095152 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547195069275 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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