Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as

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Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.

The given prompt states about two types of thinking of different people regarding responsibilities of corporations. First type of responsibility is about responsibility to promote the development of societies and environments in which it operates. Second type of responsibilities states that corporations operate within law and focus is to make money as much as possible. Thus given prompt describe 2 ways of responsibilities for working of corporations. From my point of view, I am completely agreed with the first point of view that is to promote the well-being of societies and environments in which they operate. Many valid examples will be provided to support the point of view.

First of all, let’s take the example of famous Indian telecom company Reliance Jio whose CEO is famous business tycoon Anil Ambani has provided free 4G-Internet and unlimited calls for the people for around 11 months who bought SIM card of the jio company. The main agenda behind this scheme and plan is to increase the use of high-speed internet in developing country like India where the internet speed is very less. The Reliance Corporation have a responsibility to support and promote the all-round development of societies and environment which also increases the business of company and make it is India largest telecom partner in 2018. It possesses benefits for both, the society and the company. This type of business policy is boon for both company and the society which is related to company.

Additionally, let’s take another example of another business tycoon, Jameshji Tata who started many institutes as Tata Institute of Fundamental Research (TIFR) and Tata Institute of Social Sciences, Mumbai which provide best research facilities to the citizens of India and this research institutes were funded by Tata Company itself. This approach helps the youth of India by doing research in many fields irrespective of cast, creed and language barrier. For the Tata company, it is source of advertisement for Tata brand. The type of responsibility assured continuous progress of both company and societies which plays a major role in development of this.

On the other hand, second type of responsibility of corporation depicts mentality about the reserved type of people. This organization make progress steadily but this type of organization are not best in the field as there business policy is not properly suited. There may be chances that this companies are famous for their work and progress. But it is not liked by the investors as their business policy is mainly in not highly profitable.

In conclusion, the business people’s believe plays an important role in development of organization. If it is beneficial to the societies and environment around the company it will be definitely beneficial for both people and organization.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, thus, well, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2405.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29735682819 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08358165284 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464757709251 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0275143638 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.523809524 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.619047619 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274753724046 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850042097253 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780109127982 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148092500144 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114913354774 0.0667264976115 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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