People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of
modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their
gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress?
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
They say that "Life is a big headache on a long noisy road." This statement
truly explains life nowadays. Life in the twenty first century is full of stress.
From dawn to dusk, everyone has to go through a rigorous schedule. Even
children are not exempt from this rush. Everyday there are deadlines to meet,
reports to write, bills to pay, meetings to attend, papers to submit, etc.,. Life is a
never-ending race to most people. The everyday grind builds up stress and
fatigue. Stress Reduction has become a priority with individuals as well as
organizations. People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties
of modern life. In my opinion the best ways of reducing stress are meditation,
exercise and reading books.
Meditation is an effective way to overcome stress. Meditation not only soothes
the mind from tension but also regulates heartbeat and blood pressures. It helps
an individual in attaining inner peace and equilibrium. Meditation helps in
tapping a person's inner potential and opens his mind to the universal spirit.
Exercise is another way to reduce stress. Exercising not only promotes health
but also improves thinking. When a person exercises the muscles in the body
get a workout that in turn burn fat. The burning of fat releases stored energy
and the person has an exhilarating feeling. This feeling helps the person to
overcome stress. Thus Exercise is very useful tool in stress reduction.
Reading also has a beneficial effect on individuals in stress. Reading a great
book is very therapeutic to a person with stress. Reading helps the mind to look
at other things and reduces the focus on the person's difficulties. Elegant poetry
and beautiful prose can soothe a person's mind and help him reduce stress in his
life.
In conclusion, Meditation, Exercise and reading are the best ways to reduce
stress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27687296417 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74049988729 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550488599349 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9307130286 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.8 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.28 20.6045352989 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.64 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.53405017921 529% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2685093021 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886087322367 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104410971999 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801146800929 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095096070143 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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