Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the given prompt, it has been suggested that moral judgement is an important characterisitic of an effective leader. However, it is not an important each leader's ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers. I am completely disagree with the prompt suggested here. A true leader always respect other team members which increase the faith of team-members on leader. I am completely disagree with the suggestion in the given prompt. Many relevant examples will be provided to prove that given prompt is not valid.
At first, let's take example of legend cricket player Mahendra Singh Dhoni who is widely known for his captaincy skills and team-management skill. The main difference bertween other cricket captain and him is that he treat every cricketer that is senior or junior as equal. He often take advice on some critical moments in a cricket match. He is well equipped with sense of moral judgement. Thus, every team member respects him and treat him as legend.
Secondly, let's take another famous personality of India, Dr. A.P.J Abdul Kalam also known as "Missile Man of India". He also served as President of India for five year term. He is very humble leader and maintaimn equal dignity with otyher team members. He is always there to help his team members irrespective of type of problem. Hence, it can be stated that even at highest peak of his life, he has ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
In converse, sometimes team does not respond well on many aspects related to moral judgement. This is our duty to bridge those gap and try to be an effective leader. This is the only way we become better in every aspect of life those are morally, socially and physically. If any person working in a non-friendly environment then this is the only key to success for them.
In the conclusion, the above mentioned examples prove that to have moral judgement is an important factorin life. But it is more important to have ability to maintain respect for his or her peers.All the flaws are equally addresses while providing relevant examples. Many relevant examples proved the validity of my point of view.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...r. However, it is not an important each leaders ability to maintain the respect of his ...
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Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...ct of his or her peers. I am completely disagree with the prompt suggested here. A true ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...team-members on leader. I am completely disagree with the suggestion in the given prompt...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
... is senior or junior as equal. He often take advice on some critical moments in a cr...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: J
...er famous personality of India, Dr. A.P.J Abdul Kalam also known as 'Missile...
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Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'term' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'terms'.
Suggestion: terms
...ved as President of India for five year term. He is very humble leader and maintaimn...
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Line 9, column 264, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...equal dignity with otyher team members. He is always there to help his team member...
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Line 13, column 122, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this gap' or 'those gaps'?
Suggestion: this gap; those gaps
...l judgement. This is our duty to bridge those gap and try to be an effective leader. This...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: All
...o maintain respect for his or her peers.All the flaws are equally addresses while p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90190735695 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65253222602 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539509536785 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2842144745 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.2173913043 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9565217391 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.60869565217 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261170268689 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762614842551 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106097643566 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139916439721 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996290857687 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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