Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree

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Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Different leaders show different methods of leadership: some by charisma, some by being kind, or some by force. Nevertheless, the maintenance of repsect is one aspect of leaders that is hard to omit. Although a successful leader should be able to maintain support from their colleagues, a lack of ethics may lead to irreveration which is undesirable. Moreover, to be a effective leader, one should be able to maintain homage from the public in general.

Admittedly, a representative requires the support and deference of their intimates to be effective. Especially in the democratic society where no single power can decide on a legislation, maintaining propitious relationships within the coterie is important. Representatives who lose feality will not be able to implement the policies that one believes because there would be nobody to back him up: President Park Kun Hye in Korea is a stricking example. Once she became the president, her incompetence was shocking to a limit that even her own forces turned their back on her: she wasn't able to pass a single legislation before her impeachment. Hence, the ability to keep a steadfast reputation is important for leaders.

Nevertheless, overlooking coherent ethical judgements could also lead to a loss of deference. Respect is initiated or deteriorated from many sources of influence and the inability to make moral decisions is certainly a factor that can debilitate others respect. For instance, although Hitler was able to maintain his faction by his charisma, his apathetic attitude towards ethics were cruel, leading him to lose his power in his final years. Had he been a more kind leader, he could not have faced a tragical ending, rather even if his politics failed he could have been saved by his peers.

Furthermore, support from only the intimates is not enough for a effective leadership. In a democratic society, a leader is obligated to represent the opinions and notions of the public, and a dissent towards the leader clearly indicates the incompetence of the representative. On the other hand, a effective leader would be held high by the public. For instance, Obama showed great leadership and was repsected by the citizens of the USA. People's support and reverence towards him showed that his policies were effective and helped to advance the people's well being.

In conclusion, although a authority figure should be respected by their close groups, lack of morals will be a influential factor in deciding his respect. In addition, not only respect from the party is important, but obtaining and maintaining citizen's respect would be more important.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21882352941 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03074351082 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517647058824 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4579720204 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192845791527 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562856642534 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382207498049 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104676037657 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234100852137 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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