In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required
to step down after five years.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the
position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible
consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your
position.
The focus of the given prompt states that irrespective of any field such as business, politics, education and goverment it is required to step down after five years. Continuous changing of people in the department provides experience to work in different conditions. From my point of view, I am supporting the context of the prompt regarding change of power in every field. Adequate examples will be given to prove the point of view mentioned by the author.
First of all, let's take example of Indian Parliamentery System in which their is law in constitution of India to conduct election for every 5 years for Loksabha (Upper House). All the political parties are aware of Election law and it cannot be abide by any citizen of any race, caste, creed or language. The changing of goverment in every five years gives a fair chance to people of country to change the goverment, if it not working properly. It also creates a feeling of healthy competition among the political leaders of different leader to work for development and integrity of the country. So it creates awareness among goverment to perform well which leads to continuous development of India.
Secondly, the employees of Natonalized banks transferred to another branches of same bank after a particular period of time. The main aim behind this scheme of transfer is to increase the experience to work in different environment and improve the over-all skills of employee. However, they are promoted to different branches genrally with the transfer. As India is land of diversity, so by moving to different new place enhance employee's skill-set. So it is not necessary that transfer of employees should take place after 5 years. If some branches requires more experiences with a particular skill-set then he has to move according to requirement.
On the other hand, continuous changes in power is a major problem because if a person is expert in a particular field and his work record is excellent. But, according to goverment policies he has to move to differemt location with families is major problem as he is already used to that particular branch. Along with him, his family also needs to be transferred from one place to another.
In conclusion, as every coin has two sides it appear to be true that step down in some field such as goverment, politics and education is important.However, the time period in some fields cannot be fixed as five years and priority should be given to requirements and current circumstances. Thus, relevant examples were provided which supports the point of view.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ranches of same bank after a particular period of time. The main aim behind this scheme of tra...
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...loyees should take place after 5 years. If some branches requires more experiences...
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...clusion, as every coin has two sides it appear to be true that step down in some field...
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...nt, politics and education is important.However, the time period in some fields cannot ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 429.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99766899767 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8864793488 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503496503497 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4643167702 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.45 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180796255601 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052206653206 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546710536986 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10278366477 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547786708177 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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