Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enoug

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Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.

Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

In the given issue, the author has described that the Arctic deer who lives on the Canada’s arctic region. According to the reports from the resources of Local Hunters that the population of Arctic Deer is been continuously decreasing. There are many flaws and holes in the assumptions described by author. The conclusions are also not coinciding with the premise. Consequently, suggestions will be given to improve the arguments in the issue.
First of all, the assumption made by author is that the population of arctic deer has been decreasing. This was claimed on the reports of local hunters. The flaw in this assumption is that author it is not described that is on which area the local hunters live. It may be possible that the hunters have not seen the deer in the areas where the local hunters live. It may be possible that they are lying as they are hunting arctic deer.
Additionally, the another flaw in the assumption made by author is that that due to global warming the ice melts and they don’t know where to follow the path. It may be possible that they are suffering from other problems.
In conclusion, it may be describe that the population of deer is been reducing due to many reasons.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, may, so, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 11.1786427146 18% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 55.5748502994 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 2260.96107784 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 212.0 441.139720559 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75943396226 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67110692612 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 204.123752495 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433962264151 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 705.55239521 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6578754229 57.8364921388 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.6153846154 119.503703932 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 23.324526521 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.70786347227 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171810514318 0.218282227539 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678599165672 0.0743258471296 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619572201903 0.0701772020484 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103409802302 0.128457276422 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048572746148 0.0628817314937 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.3799401198 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.3550499002 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.197005988 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.5979740519 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.32208582834 88% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 98.500998004 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.9071856287 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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