Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. Finally, Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
In the given arguement suggested by author staters that Nature's way, a chain of stores selling food and other health related products opening its franchise in town of Plainsville. According to given arguement the stores are very successful in terms of business where resident lives healthy lives. I am completely against the arguement justified by author. Thus, my point of view is against the author's advice.
First of all, the main assumption is that the claim has been depicted that the Nature's Way company is very profitable in the town like Plainsville where people live very healthy life. However, the flaw in the assumption is that author has not described about in what criterias they are living a healthy life. Relevant data should be provided to prove that the assumption made by author is correct. So to improve this type of assumptions, appropriate data should be provided by the author.
Secondly, the another assumption made by author is related to local health club of Planisville town which states that running shoes and excercise clothing are always in high demand. Now the flaw in the assumption is that he did not mention about the products which are sold by Nature's Way. To improve this flaw, detailed information should be provided by author about the products sold by Nature's Way.
In converse, the author has clearly mentioned that children of Plainsville town are potential customers for future. This assumption is meant to be correct becausemany health programs such as fitness-for-life program were carried out for students prove that Nature's Way will have a good future ahead. The company should launch there product by observing future marketing demands.
In conclusion, we summaried that as every coin as two sides there are many flaws in the arguement suggested by author. This assumptions are full of holes and bullets in it. Many valid examples were provided which proves that this assumptions can be improved by doing further practices to improve the compny business which is benificial for Nature's Way company as well as people of town of Plainsville.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 343 350
No. of Characters: 1720 1500
No. of Different Words: 167 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.304 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.015 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.656 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 130 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.176 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.226 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.59 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
.... Thus, my point of view is against the authors advice. First of all, the main ass...
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Line 9, column 403, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...about the products sold by Natures Way. In converse, the author has clearly ment...
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Line 13, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fe program were carried out for students prove that Natures Way will have a good ...
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Line 17, column 120, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...s in the arguement suggested by author. This assumptions are full of holes and bulle...
^^^^
Line 17, column 226, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...xamples were provided which proves that this assumptions can be improved by doing fu...
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Line 17, column 276, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practices improving'.
Suggestion: practices improving
...ptions can be improved by doing further practices to improve the compny business which is benificial...
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Line 17, column 353, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Way) must be used with a third-person verb: 'companies'.
Suggestion: companies
...ess which is benificial for Natures Way company as well as people of town of Plainsvill...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 343.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13994169096 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67823573391 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495626822157 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.70806601 57.8364921388 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.705882353 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 23.324526521 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.70786347227 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291876588905 0.218282227539 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092548868456 0.0743258471296 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112856449881 0.0701772020484 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166574175847 0.128457276422 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058262849061 0.0628817314937 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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