Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
The writer contends that colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relavant to the courses they teach. In some fields, the writer's suggestion might be very beneficial in order to develop the cogent concept of the courses.
In the field of engineering, when a faculty spend time in professions relavant to the courses she teach, she knows the real condition of her field, the sector where the research and innovation has to be done in order to make the people's life easier. She knows solid concept of that field. For example, one of my friend, who is a civil engineer and a teacher as well. Initially, he used to have not good knowledge despite his academic was very good. Later along with the teaching, he started to work in a company which designs the houses. I found that, his knowledge after working few years in that company, he became so clear in his sector. At the same time, he is able to make clear the concepts of the field in his classroom in the univirsity. He became more congent and persuasive.
In the field like game management, if we require a faculty to spend in the game, he can teach very well in the classroom. When he go to the playgroung and work, he better understand the real situations and later he can elucidate to his students more cle
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...courses they teach. In some fields, the writers suggestion might be very beneficial in ...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ngineering, when a faculty spend time in professions relavant to the courses she ...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'teaches'.
Suggestion: teaches
...professions relavant to the courses she teach, she knows the real condition of her fi...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ion has to be done in order to make the peoples life easier. She knows solid concept of...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...ach very well in the classroom. When he go to the playgroung and work, he better u...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62343096234 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55140940588 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560669456067 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9724014334 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0833333333 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28298615026 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104717766763 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.216857032723 0.0758088955206 286% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244447125458 0.150359130593 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198865278784 0.0667264976115 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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