Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the posit

The implementation of the policy about requirement of the faculty members to spend time outside the academic professions will definitely increase their teaching capability and scope along with hands on experience.

While college and university faculties spend a huge amount of time on analyzing the theoretical aspects of their teaching, they find a scarce time to spend where these theories are actually applied. But for their teaching to mean something they should spend enough time outside academic world, into the industrial sector where they can experience these theories being implemented. For example they can understand properly how these theories being used in practical scenario. Then they could explain the theories in question in a much better way.

Furthermore, while witnessing the implementations they could understand the limitations that applies on their teachings in a more realistic way. That will help mentioning these limitations better while teaching.

Additionally, it would be easier for students to understand the lectures taught by someone with practical experience, -because not everybody understands the esoteric language of books, which will make them ready for their future career. And most of the time the inscrutable language of academia is never used by people in profession.

While it should benefit everybody in many ways if the policy is implemented and every faculty member is required to attend practical experiences, it will also hinder the traditional way of teaching. In addition, most of the higher level faculties and students are almost all time involved in many research activities regarding the industry. So spending more time outside academia will obstruct their progress as less time will be spent. Finally in outside most of the practical scenario involves only on branch of teaching from the institutions. Spending more time on them will weaken faculties in other sectors.

So as spending enough time outside academia is beneficial to faculties and their students, while keeping track of the time they spend is necessary.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to mention; mention
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, while, for example, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 320.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.521875 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86981699928 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4170451115 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258543774257 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936121164499 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062511741315 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140184963667 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069605547899 0.0667264976115 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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