Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
The policy states that the colleges and universities should require their teaching staff to work in the professional world in the field that directly related to courses they teach. I agree with the opinion.
The higher education institutes are expected not to just to impart education and make pupil learn definitions by heart, rather their embed of responsibilities should also encompass preparing their students to face real-world. The colleges should concentrate on equipping their students with the right kind of tool that they would require to excel in the cooperate world and reach pinnacle of their careers. this is only possible when faculty members are aware of current market situation and have faced it directly. Once they have learned and survived the challenging and demanding world of professional environment, then will they be able to design the structure of the program, revise the syllabus and incorporate the study material accordingly.
A teacher teaching computer courses should be teaching the languages, such Java, PHP and .Net, that are now in demand of employers rather than what they might have studied in the undergraduate decade ago, like Cobalt and FoxPro. An engineering management teacher will explain students the kind of environments they should be expecting to face in different industries if she herself has first-handedly experienced the same, rather than restricting herself to the academics and library. A Communication Skills teacher can help his class improve at presentation better if he himself had noticed what the senior executives in the real-world expect from a good presenter. An Ethics teacher will be including the more relevant case studies when he will be able understand on what dilemmas are faced by managers in working environment.
A college or university trains its student body to prepare for kick-start their career. this is not limited to bookish knowledge only, rather it horizon must be expanded to prepare them for everyday challenges and hurdles they will face at work. To enable this, the staff should be aware of what the industry demands of it employees and this can only happen when they face experience daily activities and dynamics of professional world themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'excelling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
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...ool that they would require to excel in the cooperate world and reach pinnacle of their caree...
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Suggestion: This
...ld and reach pinnacle of their careers. this is only possible when faculty members a...
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...aching the languages, such Java, PHP and .Net, that are now in demand of employers...
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...to prepare for kick-start their career. this is not limited to bookish knowledge onl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, if, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32112676056 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87715281688 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569014084507 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.399931725 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.307692308 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188860946625 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728409040459 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689384696779 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142950250997 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695206075222 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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