Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
As countries all over the world are connected increasingly closely with each other, some suggest that it should be required that college students study in a foreign country for at least one semester. From my perspective, this recommendation would be beneficial for students in terms of academic development and career competence. As far as concerns relating to the cost, it will not be a problem as long as the educational institutions are supportive enough launch exchange programs accordingly.
To begin with, I agree with the recommendation since it will facilitate students majoring in certain fields to progress academically. For those who study in fields which are consist of content about other countries, for example, Foreign Language and International Trade, it is of no doubt beneficial for them to go abroad and achieve better academic outcome. Take me as an example, I study in an English related major and improved my academic writing skills in English as an exchange student in University of Southampton in the UK where native professors revised and help me polished my essays.
Furthermore, for those whose majors to which overseas study experience may seem not pertinent at first thought, this recommendation is also advantageous because it will assist students in all majors with building their competitive strengths such as knowledge of a foreign language and cosmopolitan views in the work place. As international economy and politics are get more and more convoluted, it is the kind of talents who master more languages and harbor cosmopolitan views are competent in the work force market. Studying abroad will help students to at least get familiar with one foreign language and build an open mind featuring mutual understanding and various perspectives while they accommodating themselves to an exotic environment.
However, some are object to this suggestion, holding the opinion that it will be a huge financial pressure for students coming from low-income families. Speaking from my own experience, this should not be a concern with the support from colleges and universities which are cognizant of the efficacy of this recommendation. As mentioned above, I studied in the UK for one semester. That experience did not cost me a fortune since I did not need to pay for the expensive tuition fees covered by my home university as part of its exchange program with University of Southampton. Following this, assistance from educational institutions should help students alleviate their burden.
To reiterate my point, I agree with the recommendation by stating its advantages in terms of academy and occupation and dispelling doubts of its proposed financial disadvantage with experience of my own.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, furthermore, however, may, so, while, at least, for example, kind of, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2298.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33178654292 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14726828654 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517401392111 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9949360375 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.2 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7333333333 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 5.21951772744 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264256263076 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922845839139 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569011393218 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14544221368 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376792784261 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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