Color photography has eliminated the need for realism in artistic painting, in the opinion of a number of art scholars and artists. At the same time, many members of the art community still feel that realistic artwork is still valuable and worthwhile.
Art is a mirror to society and with passing years, technology has made a huge impact on arts. Photography and painting are just two of multiple mediums of expression for an artist. While some argue that Color photography has eliminated the need for realism in artistic painting, others are of the opinion that realistic artwork is still valuable and worthwhile. However, the fact of the matter is, with the advances in photography, color photography has diminished the need for realistic painting.
The number of entries for yearly photography contest has been rising year on year. This rising trend indicates the increasing number of artists using photography as a medium of expression. Any art that affects people becomes more valuable. And with the rising popularity of photography, the worth of photography as an art is increasing. We have seen in recent years how one photograph can move the world. A photograph of a toddler's body washed away on the shore of a beach in Europe while trying to flee the war torn area had made headlines. It not only highlighted the crisis in Syria but also evoked emotions of empathy in people across the globe.
Additionally, the technology has had a profound impact on photography. There is absolute realism in a photograph. When a photograph is clicked it captures and freezes that moment in time and the photographer can only try to click as realistic a picture as possible. On the other hand, however realistic a painting is, it is affected by the emotions of the artist. Every painting has an element of artist in it, thereby projecting the reality as seen by an artist. This can be advantageous in situations when the intent of artist is to highlight an issue unrecognised by people.
Finally, with the advent of technology in photography, it is possible to showcase the reality as is. It has also become more accessible to common people and hence, the usage of photography as a medium of expression is bound to increase. So, although realistic painting is valuable in many respects, it's worth is decreasing with the rise of photography.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, so, still, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95738636364 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93388619585 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7787659926 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.25 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265566271076 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747019784526 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10245624175 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161585806344 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134767765003 0.0667264976115 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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