Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Education plays an important role in moulding the character of a person. Colleges and universities are the medium to impart best education, and so it is also their responsibility for the overall development of the students. Thus colleges and universities must require their students to spend atleast one semester studying in a foreign country.
Globalisation and the advent of internet has made the boundaries disappear with increasing trade between countries and more social connect between people. A young graduate now has to be aware of the global conditions in order to sustain and succeed in a competitive world. The onus of shaping the current generation and preparing them for the competitive, global market is on colleges and universities. So, it becomes necessary for colleges and universities to provide the students opportunities for exploring the world along with education.
Additionally, there are many advantages when the students move to a foreign country. A foreign exchange student is exposed to struggles of living in a foreign country and makes him more aware and adaptive to cirsumstances. A student from US who moves to India as a foreign exchange student will have the opportunity to explore a completely different country with it's enormous population of diverse beliefs and faiths and a completely different lifestyle. The students who have been exposed to multiple countries have a better world view and when such students become policy makers or leaders in their organisation have a better insight and edge in comparison to others.
Moreover, in today's world work is not limited to mundane tasks and is more challenging. One has to work with team members of different ethnicities, origins and so on. As a foreign student is exposed to such multicultural environment during graduation, he/she is better equipped when it comes to dealing with many people in organistaion. Having spent some time in foreign country makes one more empathetic and socially aware which is a huge advantage when working in a diverse work environment.
The colleges and universitites whose alumni make a name in their respective careers also benefits colleges in return. However, it may not be feasible for every student to make up for the expenses of studying in a foreign country. In such a case, universities can fund the student for a semester's foreign education which will in turn be beneficial to the university. In conclusion, in order to survive in current work environment studying in a foreign country is essential for overall growth and development of a student's career and colleges and universities must encourage the students for it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26995305164 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06954661524 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474178403756 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6307594172 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.157894737 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4210526316 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330713892746 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112772420852 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139400096551 0.0758088955206 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202229378606 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134044529995 0.0667264976115 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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