creating a national curriculum for all post college education
While many may see this as a fair system, I consider it somewhat ambiguous. having the same curriculum for all schools before college education can bridge the gap in private and public schools education which will help in a creating fair accessment for entry into colleges. most college entrance exams will be compiled on universal topics in order to stay unbaised and aside this it also puts the nation's graduates on equivalent level with the implemented curriculum which means a high standard national curriculum will produce high standard students across the nation.
However, I don't totally support the idea of same national curriulum because of some specific reasons; a major one is the advanatage that early exposure to specific knowlegde has in shaping career plans. the impact of this access cant be overemphasized. Growing up, I always wanted to be in the scientific world but having to face with a universal curriculum where I had to do commercial and arts courses was arduous, this might look to create versatility but I would have prefered if I had core elementary science subjects from prior education before getting to higher education and I am certain many think the same too.
This same curriculum had lots of students on edge and some were considered not fit to continue due to failure in other non science courses and this happens visa verse where a student trying to be a banker is failing a science course, this miscontrue needs to be corrected and allowing a better standard to grade and improve both pre college and post college education.
One of my other reasons is the acheivement scale. I strongly believe with the integration of specific curriculum in different schools, precocious skilled scientists can be raised even before college. the human mind is built to cope with challenges and find solutions. specific curriculum will help create a perfect environment to stimulate such responses leading an exponential development in mental abilities of such students. this example is commonly used in colleges and institions, which means earlier integration will be more beneficial in raising a more proficient generation.
Lastly, Education is cultural and creating a universe curriculum might disrupts the community heritage of different cultures in a nation. a goog example is Canada where there are both french speaking and english speaking communities. it is very selfish to create a one sided curriculum and will be beneficial to the nation is each community is unique in its learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, look, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16341463415 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82698499119 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558536585366 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.132827949 60.3974514979 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.133333333 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335669944032 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904249955385 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10010403451 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173939671499 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977033020691 0.0667264976115 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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