Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish There should be no government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option
Creativity of every artist is unique and they have the right to express in whatever form they feel they're comfortable
During the renaissance period in Italy, the popular saying during that time was all roads lead to Rome, there was a cultural shift and all the artists ranging from Michelangelo and Da Vinci had a chance to showcase what they have and we still enjoy and cherish the ideas and the monuments/painting made by those famous legends. If they did not have freedom to express their thoughts in more channelized format which suited them the most we would not be seeing many artefacts which would have been lost.
The creativity of the artists is what makes them unique , along with the eccentric thinking that they possess which when produced into pictures, films and which is lauded by the entire world, this would not have been possible if government imposed restrictions on certain aspects of their work of castigate their beliefs. Many a times the artists have also possessed multiple talents like Michealangelo was a sculptor and a painter and he expressed his inner thoughts emotions via them
However having said this we also need to ensure that the art which is revered by critics does not hurt the sentiments of any groups whatsoever, it should not be the reason for anyone's malign and hurt or belie this piece of art form into something else. Nowadays, we see this quite often in media that beliefs of the people are polarized by the media and the artists showing/creating anything against the government is not taken as a constructive criticism.
Creativity is what separates the artists from normal people like us, and form them to come out and express what they want the government should support their ideas and define a rule or establish a guideline alongside which they work and create a piece of work to inspire a millions of artist, keeping everything under control
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- Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish There should be no government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option 58
- Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish There should be no government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option 58
- Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish There should be no government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...t to express in whatever form they feel theyre comfortable During the renaissance p...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
.../painting made by those famous legends. If they did not have freedom to express th...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f those people is what makes them unique , along with the eccentric thinking that ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...heir work of castigate their beliefs However having said this we also need to ensure...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a million'
Suggestion: a million
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a million' or simply 'millions'?
Suggestion: a million; millions
...k and create a piece of work to inspire a millions of artist, keeping everything under con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 262.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86259541985 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47008442447 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 23.0359550562 282% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.743697345 60.3974514979 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 318.5 118.986275619 268% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 23.4991977007 279% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268204950678 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159132749767 0.0831039109588 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045858700116 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148876949732 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478266009057 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.2 14.1392134831 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 48.8420337079 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 12.1743820225 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.38706741573 125% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 11.2143820225 250% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.