Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
People desire a joyful, full of happiness life despite their age. However, it seems to me that young people have a privilege and they do enjoy their life more intensively than older ones. In this essay, some of the reasons supporting this statement will be discussed.
To begin with, aging is always accompanied by responsibilities. People in their young time do not have to take care and worry about family issues and problems such as financial situation, children care and daily conventional duties including bills, university fees, and other expenses. Young people have their parents to take care of them and deal with family challenges. Thus, the young ones have enough time to enjoy their life without worrying about the daily routine configuration.
Furthermore, youth is characterized by energy and passion. Young people are boiling to live and explore the world with all their senses. They have more enthusiasm and curiosity to try new things and experiment themselves without hesitations and fears for potential negative consequences of their actions. Therefore, without restrictions and barriers in their mind, they are ready to live to the maximum and enjoy life as much as it is possible. On contrary, older people do not generally behave unprompted but they always consider the advantages and drawbacks of their actions, a mindset that slows down the rhythm of their life.
Moreover, as people aging it is not just the responsibilities that increase but also health deteriorates. Older people do not have always the energy and welfare of the young ones. There are many examples that people, as they are getting older, have to face and cope with many health problems such as diabetes, blood pressure. These are stressful situations for the older individuals who are not often able to enjoy even their favorite food because it would damage their health.
To sum up, taking into account all things have been spoken above it could be concluded that life is more flourished for everyone in their young times because being young gives you the privilege to enjoy and feel the life to the maximum without limits and worries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10826210826 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66712624184 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524216524217 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3836117087 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.470588235 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338916275016 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119254186455 0.0831039109588 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966193608306 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208276612452 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639347641431 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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