Education makes machines which act like men and produces men who act like machines.
Humans have come a long way in the field of technological advancements whereby an increasing number of activities are now fully automated and involve little human involvement. While this has led to an improvement in the quality of life, it has also led to a change in lifestyle and behaviour.
In certain parts of the world, education is based on memory wherein students are required to remember text from books and reproduce it in examinations. What this does to the mindset of students is that it gives them the pressure of learning merely for the sake of furthering their education. They are are not exposed fully to the implication of the content of what they are learning and hence do not fully benefit from it. While it is true that these same students go on to achieve their goals, it is ultimately through thorough use of technology that gives them the necessary skills to truly make use of their knowledge.
Today, people are so engrossed in electronic devices such as phones and computers that they do not devote time to personal interactions and meetings. Most conversations occur through these devices and hence, people are losing their ability to interact with others face to face and require a medium through which to communicate.
With the automation of many activities, people are increasingly more reliant on technology to get their job done. When such technology fails, people are unable to perform the same tasks efficiently and must rely on fixing the broken technology in order to continue living their lives comfortably.
Ultimately, the more humans learn about their surroundings and go about making technological advancements, the lesser flexible they become in the order of self reliance and their ability to solve problems on their own willdecrease to a point where even the most trivial issue will be presented to a machine in order to be solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, while, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 314.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05732484076 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8359474743 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550955414013 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.048623599 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.363636364 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0298083198669 0.243740707755 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.010114580117 0.0831039109588 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0136675591403 0.0758088955206 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0151188274428 0.150359130593 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134030779069 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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