The field of study is one the most important decision for the college student to take since it depends on many factors such as; personal interests, abilities, jobs market, and future plans. Educational institutions have to play a vital role to guide students through their counseling services to choose the field of study according to their abilities and interests, but no to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
It is highly difficult to decide the criteria to evaluate the student ability to succeed in a specific field. For instance, it is hard to estimate the aptitude of the student based on his performance in particular subjects; the world is full of successful people who didn't do very well in school. for example, Bill Gates, the owner of Microsoft Company and one of the richest people in the worlds, failed in some of the classes and he didn't do well at school. Similarly, Thomas Edison, who has numerous brilliant inventions which affected many people lives, such as the electric light bulb, which exist in almost every house around the world, his teacher considered him slow and unable to learn and sent him home, that when he was overwhelmed with his endless meaningless questions. Both examples believed in their abilities and work hard to achieve their dreams.
On the other hand, in many cases, students face several social and cultural prejudices. For example, in many middle eastern countries, people consider medical and engineering fields are the best. As a result, it is quite common to find students mostly persuaded by their parents to study these fields. In such scenarios, the educational institutions have to play a vital role to help students achieve self-understanding to take their own decisions. It is important for students to take the responsibility to choose their major according to their passion and interests, not according to the higher paying rate career or the availability of the jobs. This will increase the quality of the graduates and produce creative and passionate workers.
In conclusion, while the students need guidance to decide the field of study by the educational institutions, it is the student call to decide their future career, and it is their responsibility to success on the path they choose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 236.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90254237288 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78098808235 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0356045929 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.625 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454353288875 0.243740707755 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172516563806 0.0831039109588 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.191513018805 0.0758088955206 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302890978087 0.150359130593 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156315242574 0.0667264976115 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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