“Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.”
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Education is such a complex process that it is called as a process because it starts with babyhood and it continues for all life time and it is called as complex because any event at any time may have immense effect on our education life. Since the most important part of the education starts with the families, the bigger responsibility to lead the students to pursue suitable career should be taken by their parents. However, to some extent educational institutions feel themselves responsible to guide the students in a correct manner because after particular age the most time of the students is in these institutions.
It is said that the biggest part of the education that an individual can take is up to their childhood. So parents should be aware of this important time and give their child the opportunity to be able to understand what he/she likes to be interested in and what kind of activities make him/her fell excited. They should give enough chance their children to take a part in activities that they want to progress because they can’t surface their real abilities otherwise and they can’t be sure if they want to go further without knowing adequately . So, the biggest responsibility is parent in this issue.
Educational institutions have also important effect on our career. After 5-6 old all children become a student of some educational institutions. Student gets the chance to learn somethings in more competitive world. This provides them to know himself better and to understands their abilities and desires regarding the future. A teacher has a enough time to observe a student’s academic career and he may be beneficial to take an advice for this student. However, this doesn’t mean that they have a responsibility to do this. Their thoughts about student of course should be taken into consideration but they shouldn’t try to dissuade the students from pursuing any field.
All in all, educational institutions should just provide more opinions to the students and they shouldn’t persuade the students to follow particular field and the most importantly parents should be aware of their responsibilities related to their children from the their babyhood age.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... with babyhood and it continues for all life time and it is called as complex because any...
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Line 1, column 519, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a correct manner" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...elves responsible to guide the students in a correct manner because after particular age the most ...
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Line 1, column 571, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... manner because after particular age the most time of the students is in these in...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion that an individual can take is up to their childhood. So parents should be aw...
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Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hood. So parents should be aware of this important time and give their child the ...
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Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le to understand what he/she likes to be interested in and what kind of activitie...
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Line 2, column 558, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...to go further without knowing adequately . So, the biggest responsibility is paren...
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Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve also important effect on our career. After 5-6 old all children become a student o...
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Line 4, column 342, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...res regarding the future. A teacher has a enough time to observe a student's...
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Line 4, column 433, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...career and he may be beneficial to take an advice for this student. However, this doesn&a...
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Line 6, column 267, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...bilities related to their children from the their babyhood age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16620498615 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02105514899 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481994459834 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4379254125 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211142518339 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836500122758 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562332823454 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147246955428 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431490918027 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.