Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers

Essay topics:

Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.

Education system should actively encourage student in taking their relevant encourages which make them feel comfort and interested among the field they have choose.
Education plays a vital role in student life how they have given opportunity to make them comfort and provided the courses they wanted and are comfortable in learning.
the most and important thing if students takes the courses which make them comfort and are interested in gaining knowledge is important and it makes them gain knowledge and make comfortable for them and make more analysis and they have good information and they collect good knowledge.
education should provide good quality of education and environment for the student to study and explore the subject and course they have taken and interested in.
Education institution should allow and encourage student which makes and feel comfort and learn and explore them, and they should give opportunity for the student to tell in which field they are interested and want to learn and explore in it.
Education institution should understand have to talk to each and every student and get to know in which field they are interested and should provide them the facilities accordingly to learn the course they have opted and should explore in it.

Education institution should understand that if student chooses the course or the study of interest if they take they have a good career and flexbility in gaining in good career and understand the value of course. e interested and want to learn and explore in it.
Education institution should understand have to talk to each and every student and get to know in which field they are interested and should provide them the facilities accordingly to learn the course they have opted and should explore in it.
Education institution should understand that if student chooses the course or the study of interest if they take they have a good career and flexbility in gaining in good career and understand the value of course.

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Average: 5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...nd interested among the field they have choose. Education plays a vital role in stude...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...anted and are comfortable in learning. the most and important thing if students ta...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Education
...ation and they collect good knowledge. education should provide good quality of educatio...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve opted and should explore in it. Education institution should understand that if s...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: E
...eer and understand the value of course. e interested and want to learn and explor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 37.0 14.8657303371 249% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08484848485 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58539373978 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 215.323595506 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.287878787879 0.4932671777 58% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8598440978 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.8 118.986275619 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312873413663 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180350321994 0.0831039109588 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891977893221 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19744838498 0.150359130593 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687679843412 0.0667264976115 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 100.480337079 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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